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Trees on the Rock - with you, this style is justified?

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Post  lnvinh Sun May 13, 2012 2:38 pm

This tree has grown up the stone, under your tree too large for most rocks do not?

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Post  Robert Steven Sun May 13, 2012 2:42 pm

Very nice composition, but I think the large tree on the left is too long downward...
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Post  fiona Sun May 13, 2012 2:54 pm

I'd agree. But I think the problem is that it is growing away from the rock. If it can be brought a near the rock as possible (touching it even) that might look better. It could look like several trees growing down the rock face.

Just my thoughts.

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Post  lnvinh Mon May 14, 2012 1:01 am

Robert Steven wrote:Very nice composition, but I think the large tree on the left is too long downward...

Thanks for your comment Robert;

It looks like a tree down too long really. I will adjust to position the tree planting was about 10 cm shorter.

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Post  lnvinh Mon May 14, 2012 1:07 am

fiona wrote:I'd agree. But I think the problem is that it is growing away from the rock. If it can be brought a near the rock as possible (touching it even) that might look better. It could look like several trees growing down the rock face.

Just my thoughts.

Thanks for your comment Fiona;

If brought near the rock, looking somewhat troubled and do not see the wall of mountain building

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Post  dorothy7774 Mon May 14, 2012 1:51 am

Invinh, I like what you did very much. I slightly changed the cascade (going outside to the left, hiding the straight trunk with foliage pads) and the tree in the middle (so it would not repeat the cascade). The rocks are just beautiful! Nice!

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Post  lnvinh Mon May 14, 2012 11:33 pm

dorothy7774 wrote:Invinh, I like what you did very much. I slightly changed the cascade (going outside to the left, hiding the straight trunk with foliage pads) and the tree in the middle (so it would not repeat the cascade). The rocks are just beautiful! Nice!

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Thanks dorothy;

This way the cliffs are more open look, maybe I'll use a different tree so and will do a scene like you comment.

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Post  mrthanhcong Tue May 15, 2012 7:54 am

Robert Steven wrote:Very nice composition, but I think the large tree on the left is too long downward...
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