restyling my procumbens

Hello all

I got this J.procumbens in 2009 when I was very a beginner from garden shop. it is very first of my tree and I'm got many lesson from this tree. but one day, almost got brown after bonsai show, with unknow reason. hot weather or no water or... maybe both.
I wait for healing it for 8 month and now... new styleing have add to this tree

first pics, the progress from 2009-2010



photo in 2011



in 2012 before bonsai show



after bonsai show about only 15 day... what happen?



I'm decide to restlyeing it. this is my sketch.



After waiting for it's health, I'm start working.



result for now, and start waiting again



Thank you for looking, all comments are welcome.

regards,
Pongsatorn.K

Just a thought........





I apologize for the rudimentary virtual. I had only seen your first two sets of images while I was creating this. Looks like we had similar idea about trunkline. your final image is much more sophisticated than mine....I like it!

peter keane wrote:Just a thought........
I apologize for the rudimentary virtual. I had only seen your first two sets of images while I was creating this. Looks like we had similar idea about trunkline. your final image is much more sophisticated than mine....I like it!

Thank you Peter,

I have edits this topic 2 time because the image link not work . I wish you are can see all images now.
I like your virtual, and it is can be the future of this tree if it is need less foliages .

regards,
Pongsatorn.K

What a great comeback! Sure didn't look like much hope in that one pic. I really like the movement of the trunk. Glad it survived.

mgallex wrote:What a great comeback! Sure didn't look like much hope in that one pic. I really like the movement of the trunk. Glad it survived.

Thank you!, I'm very glad too

regards,
Pongsatorn.K

Thank for sharing, can you show me what kind of soils did you use for this tree? Proportion?

Zentis wrote:
Thank for sharing, can u show me what kind of soils did u use for this tree? Proportion?

My soil mix is very simple as 15-20% Humus and mix with pumice, gravel, sand and chacoal

regards,
Pongsatorn.K

Your virtual looks very nice. If you accomplish style your tree like that, than is gonna look great.

the perfect lesson............for us all
rushing a newly styled tree into the stress of a show - (travel, indoors, bad light, dry air etc etc) is pointless - the trees are never ready anyway and all it does is ruin the hard work you have put in.

Well done for saving some of the tree - but realise it may be just about ready for a low key one day local show in 4 or 5 years at best. I have seen a number of newly worked trees with dead branches, huge foliage drop etc from sitting in multiple day shows too soon. One day expo's are fine for most material - longer needs very healthy settled trees i believe.

marcus

Very good recovery of tree and design. The damage looks like it got sprayed with something.

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For bunjing style, smaller pot ( if it is possible ) and less foliage

yamasuri wrote:Your virtual looks very nice. If you accomplish style your tree like that, than is gonna look great.

Thank you, I will try again in future when more healthy and more details

Regards,
Pongsatorn.K

marcus watts wrote:the perfect lesson............for us all
rushing a newly styled tree into the stress of a show - (travel, indoors, bad light, dry air etc etc) is pointless - the trees are never ready anyway and all it does is ruin the hard work you have put in.

Well done for saving some of the tree - but realise it may be just about ready for a low key one day local show in 4 or 5 years at best. I have seen a number of newly worked trees with dead branches, huge foliage drop etc from sitting in multiple day shows too soon. One day expo's are fine for most material - longer needs very healthy settled trees i believe.

marcus

Thank you
at here less day show are 3 day and max to 10 day! too long. and the waterboy do not work well as the owner

regards,
Pongsatorn.K

Billy M. Rhodes wrote:Very good recovery of tree and design. The damage looks like it got sprayed with something.

Thank you Billy yes some time I think like you too .

regards,
Pongsatorn.K

abcd wrote:
For bunjing style, smaller pot ( if it is possible ) and less foliage

Thank you

I like your idea, but it is not posible because almost of the top foliages got brown

regards,
Pongsatorn.K

i like first style too.

Oat76 wrote:i like first style too.

Thank you

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pongsatorn.k wrote:..

I'm decide to restlyeing it. this is my sketch.



..

Most definetly! Great sketch, congrats! Ahh, feels good to my eyes..

-Dorothy

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dorothy7774 wrote:

pongsatorn.k wrote:..

I'm decide to restlyeing it. this is my sketch.



..

Most definetly! Great sketch, congrats! Ahh, feels good to my eyes..

-Dorothy

I agree with Dorothy... Fantastic work.

Can I ask: do you use pencil or paints for your art works??


As for the tree... Go for this design! It'll be a looker!!

Regards
Bryan

dorothy7774 wrote:

pongsatorn.k wrote:..

I'm decide to restlyeing it. this is my sketch.



..

Most definetly! Great sketch, congrats! Ahh, feels good to my eyes..

-Dorothy

Thank you very much Dorothy, I'm very happy when you're like it!

regards,
Pongsatorn.K

Oat76 wrote:คุณอู๋ ครับ ผมเลี้ยงสนอยู่ อยากปรึกษาครับ
มีหลายต้นแต่เล็กๆๆสนใจๆ
แต่อุปกรณ์พวก ลวด ครีมทาแผล ยากันเชื้อรา แม้แต่
กระถางหายากมากครับ ผมอยู่เชียงรายครับ
ผมก็ติดตาม forum ใน thai bonsai club อยู่ครับ.
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....ขอบคุณครับ..
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DangerousBry wrote:

dorothy7774 wrote:

pongsatorn.k wrote:..

I'm decide to restlyeing it. this is my sketch.



..

Most definetly! Great sketch, congrats! Ahh, feels good to my eyes..

-Dorothy

I agree with Dorothy... Fantastic work.

Can I ask: do you use pencil or paints for your art works??


As for the tree... Go for this design! It'll be a looker!!

Regards
Bryan

thank you very much I'm used black pen and black marker in this sketch.

regards,
Pongsatorn.K

I really love the design for this tree.