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Post  fiona Tue Jul 13, 2010 1:40 pm

Ian Young wrote: Yer heed il be turned pickin one Twisted Evil
It's a well-kent fact that I've been aff ma heid fir pure ages!" Wink


Vicissitudes eh? There are probably only about two people on here that'd use a word like that, and one of them's me. Like it, Jim!
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Post  fiona Tue Jul 13, 2010 4:57 pm

Thanks to everyone who has made suggestions herein and do feel free to make more.

I have done a couple of additional things to the tree today, not the least of which being to unwire it as it was beginning to dig in. I'm offering up a "spot the difference" competition to see if you notice the other change. There may be prizes.

I'll probably let it rest up for a bit now as it has been recommended to me that major styling is held off until early next spring.

Here's how it looks at close of play today.

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Post  Ricky Keaton Tue Jul 13, 2010 6:15 pm

Pavel Slovák wrote:
It is also important to think about the possibility of the imposition of the pot. How it will be placed.

Pavel

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what software u use to do that with?
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Post  Guest Tue Jul 13, 2010 6:36 pm

You have Jinned the bottom back branch Fiona.

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Post  Guest Tue Jul 13, 2010 6:50 pm

Can't wait for my prize Fiona....really excited Very Happy

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Post  fiona Tue Jul 13, 2010 8:18 pm

will baddeley wrote:Can't wait for my prize Fiona....really excited Very Happy
I just put it in the post - Royal Snail second class. You should get it by October and if you're lucky it won't have gone completely off by then. Well done. A worthy winner.
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Post  Guest Tue Jul 13, 2010 9:20 pm

Probably get here before the new camera I ordered 2 weeks ago Sad

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Post  John Quinn Wed Jul 14, 2010 8:26 pm

"nice tree, Fiona!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" Cool
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Post  anttal63 Wed Jul 14, 2010 10:12 pm

Beautiful design & virt pavel, you have found the rythm and balance in that tree. Nice material Fiona that is the way i would take it if it were mine. cheers
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Post  Ami BAS Wed Jul 14, 2010 10:18 pm

Fiona,

The main difference between Lucas' and Pavel's designs [apart of the Photoshop work Very Happy ] is the positioning of the foliage with/ against the trunk movement. Pavel's is more balanced and natural to me.
Besides, after you make your choice and complete finish with the foliage design, I think you'll need to fine tune the jins, especially the lower branch of the left one and the inner "finger" of the bottom-right.
I think it is great when one have a tree with some options, and yours is on its way to a masterpiece.
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Post  fiona Thu Jul 15, 2010 5:03 pm

John Quinn wrote:"nice tree, Fiona!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"
And you can quote me on that! flutter eyelashes Wink
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Post  fiona Fri Jul 16, 2010 9:14 pm

Did a styling on it yesterday and today as it was too miserable weather to do much else.

I have been "brave" of sorts and have attempted to be true to Pavel's virt. As it is, the foliage is pretty much all at the end of branches so taking it in as close to the trunk as per the virt will take a bit more growing. I have also kept some extra foliage on it as I wanted a security net in case of mishaps with branches.

It's significantly different to what I had envisaged two years ago, but I must say I am pretty much happy with the result. There's still a lot of bulking out and repositioning, but it's well on its way.

And apologies to Pavel as I promised him I wouldn't tinker with it too much over the summer. Sorry Pavel I'm a woman - when did we ever do what we were told?

Right I'm away to do other "woman" things such as find it essential to vacuum while the football is on and unnecessarily move furniture around just because I fancy a change. Evil or Very Mad

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Just realised I should have reduce the higher jin at the left side, and I think the drooping one at the rear needs to go as well.
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Post  Smithy Fri Jul 16, 2010 9:54 pm

Thats looking great Fiona.
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Post  F. Waheedy Fri Jul 16, 2010 10:11 pm

Very nice work, Fiona. Love the pads. Looks great.
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Post  Guest Fri Jul 16, 2010 10:28 pm

Its so frustrating when I'm at work that all I get is text. Mad

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Post  Smithy Fri Jul 16, 2010 10:31 pm

will baddeley wrote:Its so frustrating when I'm at work that all I get is text. Mad

What work do you at this time of night Will.
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Post  fiona Fri Jul 16, 2010 11:21 pm

Smithy wrote: What work do you at this time of night Will.
With that frock on? Mebbe it's best not to ask!
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Post  Smithy Fri Jul 16, 2010 11:55 pm

fiona wrote:
Smithy wrote: What work do you at this time of night Will.
With that frock on? Mebbe it's best not to ask!

Laughing Laughing Laughing
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Post  Guest Sat Jul 17, 2010 1:19 am

Sexists!! Shocked

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Post  AlainK Sat Jul 17, 2010 2:34 am

I think it looks much better like that.

Maybe now you should leave it alone until next year, it would be a pity to over-stress it. It looks great as it is.

We have a saying that goes something like "'Better' is worse than 'good'" Wink

(Can't remember the equivalent in English, 3:32 AM... Rolling Eyes )
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Post  Victrinia Ridgeway Sat Jul 17, 2010 6:37 am

Brava Fiona! I love it... I was betting you'd take Pavel's virt while I was reading through... it spoke to my heart the most... it's just a riveting image. Can't wait to watch it evolve. Smile

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Post  Pavel Slovák Sat Jul 17, 2010 6:41 am

Hi Fiona.

Very good work. It will be really beautiful and dynamic tree. Congratulations. Now let the tree rest. Very Happy Very Happy ThumbsUp

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Post  anttal63 Sun Jul 18, 2010 11:17 pm

Well done Fiona!!! cheers
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Post  fiona Sat Jul 21, 2012 11:59 am

How it looks today.

I now have a decision to make as the jin (which was already weak) succumbed to our early winter storms last year and broke off completely.
The choice is to go with or without the jin. Pavel's virtual was designed around the jin and wouldn't work particularly well without it. Yet as I am not able to get the foliage placed exactly as it was in the virt, perhaps now is the time to do a design modification around not having a jin.

My initial reaction is that there is enough other deadwood to carry the idea previously put forward in this thread of the tree having suffered some sort of lightning strike. Your thoughts are very welcome. Please note I will be reducing the foliage even further.

Without the jin:
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With the jin (it's only resting there - it isn't actually fixed):
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Post  coh Sat Jul 21, 2012 12:39 pm

I think it looks fine without the jin. That's an unbiased view, since I'm pretty sure I haven't seen this thread before (and haven't seen the virtual you're referring to).
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