Pino Silvestre

Hello, I want to show the new model of my pine,
I hope you like it.
a greeting

Great gnarly twisting trunk and mature bark like it.

Hi Rafalbar
Very nice yamadori. Technically good work.
But the composition is not ideal for me. If you introduce a bowl, movement and balance the tree rows. If it were my tree, I would crown the tree continued to move the tree trunk on the left side.
Sorry for another look.
Gretings Pavel

A little direction to go. Some other tree crown, but now just quickly explain my intention.

Thanks Neil and Pavel.

Pavel I really like your design idea and I appreciate your opinion and vision, because I am a great admirer of your pine.

Perhaps in future I dare to change the design, but for now I'm very happy with the outcome.

Thank you very much

https://youtu.be/Wc2LXJhVPrk

I leave another youtube.

https://youtu.be/KfmiIsPV5SA

and a pair of yamadoris, I hope you like,

https://youtu.be/WsvtRgSvJiw

https://youtu.be/Y2O_KZlp5lk

Nice Pavel, I like your design very much. It also gets rid of that straight trunk near the top. You've got a great eye Pavel...been reading your threads awhile now
Chris

Edit: Pavel, if you're still reading this, may I ask your reasoning behind suggesting the trunkline continue to the left vs. what Rafalbar did? I like both, but yours a bit better and I don't know why. I'm still developing 'my eye' and it would help a lot to know your reasoning.

Thanks! And not to hijack your thread Rafalbar, I still like you design

Great Yamadori.....

This is what i was thinking. I guess similar lines to what Pavel has suggested!!

Cheers
Bryan!