Pino Silvestre
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rafalbar- Member
Re: Pino Silvestre
Hi Rafalbar
Very nice yamadori. Technically good work.
But the composition is not ideal for me. If you introduce a bowl, movement and balance the tree rows. If it were my tree, I would crown the tree continued to move the tree trunk on the left side.
Sorry for another look.
Gretings Pavel
A little direction to go. Some other tree crown, but now just quickly explain my intention.
Very nice yamadori. Technically good work.
But the composition is not ideal for me. If you introduce a bowl, movement and balance the tree rows. If it were my tree, I would crown the tree continued to move the tree trunk on the left side.
Sorry for another look.
Gretings Pavel
A little direction to go. Some other tree crown, but now just quickly explain my intention.
Pavel Slovák- Member
Re: Pino Silvestre
Thanks Neil and Pavel.
Pavel I really like your design idea and I appreciate your opinion and vision, because I am a great admirer of your pine.
Perhaps in future I dare to change the design, but for now I'm very happy with the outcome.
Thank you very much
Pavel I really like your design idea and I appreciate your opinion and vision, because I am a great admirer of your pine.
Perhaps in future I dare to change the design, but for now I'm very happy with the outcome.
Thank you very much
rafalbar- Member
Re: Pino Silvestre
https://youtu.be/Wc2LXJhVPrk
I leave another youtube.
https://youtu.be/KfmiIsPV5SA
and a pair of yamadoris, I hope you like,
https://youtu.be/WsvtRgSvJiw
https://youtu.be/Y2O_KZlp5lk
I leave another youtube.
https://youtu.be/KfmiIsPV5SA
and a pair of yamadoris, I hope you like,
https://youtu.be/WsvtRgSvJiw
https://youtu.be/Y2O_KZlp5lk
rafalbar- Member
Re: Pino Silvestre
Nice Pavel, I like your design very much. It also gets rid of that straight trunk near the top. You've got a great eye Pavel...been reading your threads awhile now
Chris
Edit: Pavel, if you're still reading this, may I ask your reasoning behind suggesting the trunkline continue to the left vs. what Rafalbar did? I like both, but yours a bit better and I don't know why. I'm still developing 'my eye' and it would help a lot to know your reasoning.
Thanks! And not to hijack your thread Rafalbar, I still like you design
Chris
Edit: Pavel, if you're still reading this, may I ask your reasoning behind suggesting the trunkline continue to the left vs. what Rafalbar did? I like both, but yours a bit better and I don't know why. I'm still developing 'my eye' and it would help a lot to know your reasoning.
Thanks! And not to hijack your thread Rafalbar, I still like you design
Last edited by Fore on Mon Jan 02, 2012 4:47 pm; edited 1 time in total (Reason for editing : Add note)
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