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White pine

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Post  jeffrey Mon Nov 07, 2011 6:49 pm

Recently wired.
With the help of Gijs Meboer.

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White pine 2011-012

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Post  marcus watts Mon Nov 07, 2011 6:59 pm

fantastic lower trunk and lower branches - maybe a little too dense in the top half of the tree though - without spaces it makes the tree appear much smaller and younger than it could. - but thats just what jumped out at me on first impression ! - without doubt its got masses of appeal and potential, very nice tree
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Post  Seth Ellwood Wed Nov 09, 2011 12:34 am

Nice compitision. It loooks healthy.

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Post  cram Wed Nov 09, 2011 5:23 pm

nice tree..
an easily possible evolution
[img]White pine Dsc06717[/img]
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Post  sunip Wed Nov 09, 2011 9:13 pm

Hello Jeffry and Cram,

Nice tree Jeffry, i would try to change the appearance of the lower right branch a bit.
Cram your drawing shows a less jumpy and better proportioned tree, so quite tempting
only you do not draw the trunk correctly.
I do not think you can change that by turning or tilting the tree a little in the pot?
Sunip, Wink

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Post  jeffrey Wed Nov 16, 2011 4:12 pm

Thanks for your comments.
Very interesting drawing Cram thanks.
Greetings, Jeffrey
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Post  cram Wed Nov 16, 2011 4:52 pm

you re welcome
but actually sunip is right...it was not my best drawing
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Post  LELE Thu Nov 17, 2011 4:38 am

Amazing tree....well done
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Post  sunip Sun Dec 04, 2011 7:42 pm

Hello Jeffry,
We saw your pine last week in the Dutch Bonsai Federation exhibit.
Nice to see it in nature, take care of it.
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Post  Robert Steven Mon Dec 05, 2011 12:32 am

I like the trunk movement and the foliage arrangement with sufficient empty space..looks very natural...
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