February 2011 to do a black pine

February 2011 to do a black pine。Please mention more criticism.

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Interesting material. I'd like to see the foliage with a bit more detailing and smaller needles.
The scar on the trunk could use more three dimensional carving to make it look older.
The roots are really jumbled but instead of worrying about them they are going to have to be a feature of the tree.

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Rob Kempinski wrote:Interesting material. I'd like to see the foliage with a bit more detailing and smaller needles.
The scar on the trunk could use more three dimensional carving to make it look older.
The roots are really jumbled but instead of worrying about them they are going to have to be a feature of the tree.

Production still preliminary, further treatment this fall。

I like it.

But, i don´t like the pot, it´s too small and dos not fit the tree at all.


Greetings
Mário

Hi,

I think Rob is spot on, on what he has said and if I may add, once the ramification is better and the pot a little larger, the overall composition would look even better....

All the best on a wonderful material....

Ravi

I can't see the photos.....

This thread was hotlinked to a site where the image was either moved or deleted. The 1st image was supposed to be at https://servimg.com/view/16313379/37. That redirects to a no-image-found page of some sort.

This illustrates the dangers of hosting pictures off-site. This thread has become useless.