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Post  Pavel Slovák Wed Nov 24, 2010 7:49 pm

Hi all friends.

Originally my Yamadori Larch tree is a bit bigger. Current owner is a friend Mirek. The first styling, we decided to crown the tree to work with a fairly accurate view of the future.
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Post  Pavel Slovák Wed Nov 24, 2010 9:22 pm

Hi all.

The first styling, I worked in November 2008.

Today we completed a second styling. Tree crown is much improved with the development of the tree are satisfied. The spring will need to first pot. Very Happy

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more pict.: http://www.bonsaivigi.cz/fotoalbum/tvarovani-a-vyvoj---styling-and-development/larix-decidua-_-2008-
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Post  Neil Jaeger Wed Nov 24, 2010 10:15 pm

Another GREAT tree. Hope to see pictures when it "wakes up".
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Post  Guest Thu Nov 25, 2010 12:34 pm

Hello Pavel. Another great styling job. There are a couple of points that could improve this tree in my opinion. The long jin on the left is a distraction for me. I think it is too long and lacking in character. Also the top of the tree appears to be too short and I think it would benefit from a bit more height and a more gentle taper.

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Post  Pavel Slovák Thu Nov 25, 2010 1:00 pm

Hi Neil, thank you very much for nice replies. Very Happy

Hi Will, thank you for nice replies and current comment. Very Happy
Yes, you're right about Jin is extra. Yesterday, at the conclusion that we talked with Sam. I left it on purpose for the opinions of others. What about you? Trim, remove, or in the styling composition with the lower branches?

With a height I'm not so sure, maybe there will be adjustments in future periods. But it's possible.Very Happy Wink

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Post  Guest Thu Nov 25, 2010 1:12 pm

I think the jin should be shortened to at least within the foliage and maybe shorter. I don't think it should be removed though.

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Post  Pavel Slovák Mon Nov 29, 2010 7:46 am

Hi Will
Thanks for the comments. What do you think of this?
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Post  Guest Mon Nov 29, 2010 1:11 pm

Hello Pavel. I like the second one with the movement around to the front. It flows very well with the rest of the tree. Certainly worth a go and if it doesn't work, you can always shorten further.

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Post  dorothy7774 Mon Nov 29, 2010 2:21 pm

will baddeley wrote:Hello Pavel. Another great styling job. There are a couple of points that could improve this tree in my opinion. The long jin on the left is a distraction for me. I think it is too long and lacking in character. Also the top of the tree appears to be too short and I think it would benefit from a bit more height and a more gentle taper.

I agree. Nice work, Pavel. Your friend must be very happy with the tree. If it was mine I'd grow more taper too. Wink -dorothy

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Post  Guest Mon Nov 29, 2010 2:27 pm

Another top virtual Dorothy and that is more like the taper I would give it. I think it would be more dynamic as a tree, if there was a continuation of the curve in the trunk though.

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Post  dorothy7774 Mon Nov 29, 2010 3:11 pm

Thanks, Will. You mean this curve? rabbit

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Post  Guest Mon Nov 29, 2010 3:33 pm

I love the way you pop out of the ether, drop a fantastic virtual then "pooof", gone again.

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Post  Lee Kennedy Mon Nov 29, 2010 6:55 pm

Great tree they look like fun to style,think i'll have to find a suitable one for myself,never really had a larch
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Post  Pavel Slovák Mon Nov 29, 2010 8:06 pm

Hi Dorothy - thank you for your nice compliment and inspiring virtuals. Very Happy ThumbsUp First I like and it is acceptable to me. The second movement of the upper part probably not.Very Happy

Hi Wil - thanks for inspiring discussion. Very Happy

Hi Lee - Larch trees are a great many faces. Do not hesitate and search. Very Happy Very Happy

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Post  martin kolacia Mon Nov 29, 2010 9:36 pm

dorothy showed good direction ...much older ...very nice virt ThumbsUp
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