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Post  Peter E. Mon Aug 25, 2014 8:06 pm

I have been working with this Mugo Pine for a few years.
It is nearly ready to show, but which front would you choose ?.
Which Front ?. Mugo-110
Which Front ?. Mugo-210

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Post  0soyoung Mon Aug 25, 2014 8:26 pm

The second one.

The pot doesn't seem quite right for the tree in either case, though.
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Post  Kevin S - Wisco Bonsai Mon Aug 25, 2014 8:30 pm

neither tickle me personally...

perhaps its the angle of the photos, but each choice seems to find part of the tree obscured behind the pot...

then again, for all i know (as a novice), perhaps that is perfectly acceptable...

i just find it distracting... (along with the stray tuft of foliage at the base)
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Post  Peter E. Mon Aug 25, 2014 8:31 pm

Suggestions then ???

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Post  Kevin S - Wisco Bonsai Mon Aug 25, 2014 8:34 pm

hard to say with only those 2 pics...

and i personally should leave suggestions to those with more experience.
i was simply stating what i thought might be problematic if you stick it in the contest. Wink
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Post  Tom Mon Aug 25, 2014 8:35 pm

Is there a possible front where the 'loop' of the trunk is open, rather than appearing to form a complete circle?
May just be a photo thing and different in 3d, but for me that grabs the attention, distracting from the rest of the tree.

Of the two you show, I think I prefer the first.
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Post  Peter E. Mon Aug 25, 2014 10:08 pm

Sorry Tom, but no.
These are the planed fronts.

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Post  Precarious Mon Aug 25, 2014 10:52 pm

Presented with those two choices, I would go with the first. My eye goes right to the trunk of a bonsai, and when I cant see it the rest of the tree looks detached and separate from the base. It is disconcerting to me.
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Post  michaelsturm Tue Aug 26, 2014 1:32 am

I like Number 2. I would remove the weeds to let us see a bit more trunk line. Its a pretty good start on an interesting tree! I look forward to seeing what you decide

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