Taxodium chokkan
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Taxodium chokkan
Hello dear friends, posted a summary and update of this plant in my blog:
The post is this: http://fabiano.projetobonsai.com/2009/06/27/taxodium-distichum-chokkan/
Big hug,
Fabiano.
The post is this: http://fabiano.projetobonsai.com/2009/06/27/taxodium-distichum-chokkan/
Big hug,
Fabiano.
Fabianoscosta- Member
Re: Taxodium chokkan
Hi. Im trying to get an idea of scale but struggling with translation of the blog details: I think it says that the height 85cm total and 50 from top of the pot. Also the diameter of the trunk is 16cm at the base and 6cm at the apex. Is that even close to what you wrote?
I like the tree and did something similar with a Dawn Redwood some years ago - now sold on and still living. Are you planning on extending the shari the entire way down the front?
Good luck.
Fiona
I like the tree and did something similar with a Dawn Redwood some years ago - now sold on and still living. Are you planning on extending the shari the entire way down the front?
Good luck.
Fiona
fiona- Member
Re: Taxodium chokkan
Gary, thank you for the photo!
Hello Fiona, the wrong is the only measure of 50cm which is the width of the crown, or width of the pot.
I think the Shari base but may come up before, but my next step with this plan is to give attention to nebari, so how she can increase this Shari course, as has already happened, I hope to see later.
Thank you for your comment.
Best regards all,
Fabiano.
Hello Fiona, the wrong is the only measure of 50cm which is the width of the crown, or width of the pot.
I think the Shari base but may come up before, but my next step with this plan is to give attention to nebari, so how she can increase this Shari course, as has already happened, I hope to see later.
Thank you for your comment.
Best regards all,
Fabiano.
Fabianoscosta- Member
Re: Taxodium chokkan
I think you've got a good start here. The only two recommendations I'd make at this point is to resolve the conflict in the apex .. either the deadwood or the live branch should be the apex, but not both. The other is to add more downward angle to the branches to make them appear older and nature-burdened. Optional would be the removal of at least the two lower braches, and perhaps other low branches as well. If you look at the photo Gary provided, most Taxodiums (and their cousin, Metasequoia) don't retain low branches as they age.
Kindest,
-d
Kindest,
-d
DaveP- Member
Re: Taxodium chokkan
You have a very nice trunk to work from.
However, few bald cypress grow in the shape you are contemplating. Lost in our old IBC site was a thread featuring dozens of old bald cypress from (mostly) Florida and Louisiana. I don't recall any of those shaped as a tall pyramid. Most of them tended toward some variety of a flat top, with or without lower branches. Many of them looked very much like old oaks -- except they were growing in water.
But a typical shape is the one popularized by Vaughn Banting -- the flat top. Here's mine. It's badly in need of a haircut, and probably could afford to lose some more of those upper branches, as it's a bit topheavy. but it contains some of the things you seem to want -- the prominent shari, for example. This one is MUCH smaller than yours.
One comment on the branches, whether or not you end up keeping them: They're arrow straight, most of them. You need more side and up and down bends in them. These look as if the tree is scared stiff.
However, few bald cypress grow in the shape you are contemplating. Lost in our old IBC site was a thread featuring dozens of old bald cypress from (mostly) Florida and Louisiana. I don't recall any of those shaped as a tall pyramid. Most of them tended toward some variety of a flat top, with or without lower branches. Many of them looked very much like old oaks -- except they were growing in water.
But a typical shape is the one popularized by Vaughn Banting -- the flat top. Here's mine. It's badly in need of a haircut, and probably could afford to lose some more of those upper branches, as it's a bit topheavy. but it contains some of the things you seem to want -- the prominent shari, for example. This one is MUCH smaller than yours.
One comment on the branches, whether or not you end up keeping them: They're arrow straight, most of them. You need more side and up and down bends in them. These look as if the tree is scared stiff.
JimLewis- Member
Re: Taxodium chokkan
I guess a better first question would be what type of tree are you trying to emulate or create an image of? A swamp-growing Bald Cypress? An ancient Coastal Redwood? An even-more-ancient Dawn Redwood?
Each has slightly different characteristics, as Jim points out. One commonality they share is a lack of lower branching.
Kindest~
-d
Each has slightly different characteristics, as Jim points out. One commonality they share is a lack of lower branching.
Kindest~
-d
DaveP- Member
Re: Taxodium chokkan
JimLewis wrote:
(...)
I don't recall any of those shaped as a tall pyramid. Most of them tended toward some variety of a flat top, with or without lower branches. Many of them looked very much like old oaks -- except they were growing in water.
But a typical shape is the one popularized by Vaughn Banting -- the flat top. Here's mine. It's badly in need of a haircut, and probably could afford to lose some more of those upper branches, as it's a bit topheavy.
(...)
Maybe Taxodium distichum are "real bonsai trees": like olive-trees, one that catches your attention will never look like a "real" tree at all.
Masterpieces olive-trees that look like junipers, with lots of jins ans sharis and dead wood, and "Wow!!!!" (ever been to Catalunya, ever seen what a 500 yr-old olive looks really like?...)
Go ahead with your styling, even very few Bald Cypresses look like that, it isthe best way to make the most of this tree. It will look like a nice bonsai, what the heck if thunder strikes one in 10,000 trees where you are, it will be the one.
Listen to beauty...
AlainK- Member
Re: Taxodium chokkan
DaveP wrote:
One commonality they share is a lack of lower branching.
Right: that's why I find Vaughn Banting's tree quite boring to look at. In spite of the technique, which must be excellent, the impression it gives is quite disappointing.
It must be a cultuiral divide again: here in the old world, we have some awsome (to my taste) Bald cypresses: the climate being very different, much cooler in the winter, not so hot in the summer, even very old specimens are pyramid-shaped, with "pneumatophores" (airial roots) at the base.
There is a pond by a "chateau", I haven't been able to take the right photo yet, but in november, when the frost lies a white icing on the brick-coloured leaves, my, what a sight...
Bald Cypress are at home now in Europe, they are "Cyprès Chauves" in France, they are doing well, they are beautiful and don't look like battered trees fighting for a way tro survive, they just are splendid trees, and pyramid-shaped thanks to the climate.
My 2-euro-cents...
AlainK- Member
"As You Like It" W. Shakespeare
There is no requirement to make any bonsai look like a full size tree of the same species you'd find in nature.
If you want to do that, fine but it's not a requirement for bonsai. John Naka said "make you bonsai look like a tree" but he didn't say "make it look like a mature tree of the same species in the ground."
If you want to make a tree that conjures up old age and antiquity then fine too.
If you want to make a tree that conjures up the image of strip mall, then fine too.
As art, any tree can be made to have any form. Some forms will very hard to execute, like a exposed driftwood ficus (unless you are making a Phoenix graft) others will resemble mature trees or young trees.
The style that Fabian has started is what we in the US we call "immature juvenile" Bald Cypress Style with exposed driftwood. It makes nice looking bonsai, however it doesn't conjure up a true image of antiquity. The Bald Cypress in France are probably all in this immature juvenile stage. The older a cypress gets the wilder it gets but again scaling down the wildness into a bonsai pot is a tough chore. Remember bonsai is about "selective compression." (A concept I cover in my book )
I styled a bonsai similar to Fabian's several years ago. I called it "White Lightning" but alas it died while on display the WDW EPCOT Flower and Garden show several years ago.
Vaugnh Banting's Flat Top Bald Cypress conjured up the image of a fully mature tree fighting for survival in a Bald Cypress Dome. The top goes haywire looking for light in the competitive forest.
If you want to do that, fine but it's not a requirement for bonsai. John Naka said "make you bonsai look like a tree" but he didn't say "make it look like a mature tree of the same species in the ground."
If you want to make a tree that conjures up old age and antiquity then fine too.
If you want to make a tree that conjures up the image of strip mall, then fine too.
As art, any tree can be made to have any form. Some forms will very hard to execute, like a exposed driftwood ficus (unless you are making a Phoenix graft) others will resemble mature trees or young trees.
The style that Fabian has started is what we in the US we call "immature juvenile" Bald Cypress Style with exposed driftwood. It makes nice looking bonsai, however it doesn't conjure up a true image of antiquity. The Bald Cypress in France are probably all in this immature juvenile stage. The older a cypress gets the wilder it gets but again scaling down the wildness into a bonsai pot is a tough chore. Remember bonsai is about "selective compression." (A concept I cover in my book )
I styled a bonsai similar to Fabian's several years ago. I called it "White Lightning" but alas it died while on display the WDW EPCOT Flower and Garden show several years ago.
Vaugnh Banting's Flat Top Bald Cypress conjured up the image of a fully mature tree fighting for survival in a Bald Cypress Dome. The top goes haywire looking for light in the competitive forest.
Rob Kempinski- Member
Re: Taxodium chokkan
Very nice examples of different styles Rob.
The flat-top one looks so natural, it's really great work, makes me feel transported to another part of the world. this one deserves respect because it looks authentic.
Yes, that's a beautiful tree.
The flat-top one looks so natural, it's really great work, makes me feel transported to another part of the world. this one deserves respect because it looks authentic.
Yes, that's a beautiful tree.
AlainK- Member
Re: Taxodium chokkan
Hello Dave, I imagine the apex more full of foliage, I think that can be removed later this small apical jin, if it is really uncomfortable.
On the angle of the lower branches I put it down a little from the original work, but I think it might be lower, yes, thanks for the comment.
Best regards,
Fabiano.
On the angle of the lower branches I put it down a little from the original work, but I think it might be lower, yes, thanks for the comment.
Best regards,
Fabiano.
Fabianoscosta- Member
Re: Taxodium chokkan
Hello Jim, my intention is to chokkan imitating a conifer pine as a solitary, completely formal, as I can.
Maybe so the lower branches leaving the taxodium itself in nature.
I know the work of Vaughn Banting, has been of great inspiration to construct the dead wood, but do not believe in the same style proposed by him in his work.
On the branches which should be cut with the intention of greater harmony in the crown, following this order, or friend would like some more I suggest those who really should get out in time or another.
I gave a little movement to the primary branches but very little and tried to do this with more pruning to tertiary, as well a better taper in subsidiaries, but I can not see a chokkam really formal and straight, its subsidiaries secondary with more movement, I would like to know your opinion on the matter.
Thank you very much your opinion and help, like it could continue counting on it.
I will show you in photos what comes close to my project, with some examples found on the Internet:
And here some photos in nature from taxodium inthis style:
Best regards,
Fabiano.
Maybe so the lower branches leaving the taxodium itself in nature.
I know the work of Vaughn Banting, has been of great inspiration to construct the dead wood, but do not believe in the same style proposed by him in his work.
On the branches which should be cut with the intention of greater harmony in the crown, following this order, or friend would like some more I suggest those who really should get out in time or another.
I gave a little movement to the primary branches but very little and tried to do this with more pruning to tertiary, as well a better taper in subsidiaries, but I can not see a chokkam really formal and straight, its subsidiaries secondary with more movement, I would like to know your opinion on the matter.
Thank you very much your opinion and help, like it could continue counting on it.
I will show you in photos what comes close to my project, with some examples found on the Internet:
And here some photos in nature from taxodium inthis style:
Best regards,
Fabiano.
Fabianoscosta- Member
Re: Taxodium chokkan
Alain, Rob and Gary, i really apreciate yours participation on this discussion, it´s fantastic!
Best regards,
Fabiano.
Best regards,
Fabiano.
Fabianoscosta- Member
Re: Taxodium chokkan
Fabianoscosta wrote:Alain, Rob and Gary, i really apreciate yours participation on this discussion, it´s fantastic!
Best regards,
Fabiano.
Fabiano, you're welcome. The full size trees you show in your recent post are relatively young. Old cypress trees lose that cone shape. But all styles are possible. I even had a cascade Bald Cypress for a while until my neighbor chopped down an full size oak tree and had it fall on top of it.
Rob Kempinski- Member
Re: Taxodium chokkan
Rob i understand, thank you and sorry for your waterfall, should take the neighbor's oak tree to replace it, if not size the way, a little more ...
Regards,
Fabiano
Regards,
Fabiano
Fabianoscosta- Member
Re: Taxodium chokkan
After seeing 4 grown men struggling to move that beast last fall, it's simply an awesome sight to behold!
Kindest~
-d
Kindest~
-d
DaveP- Member
Re: Taxodium chokkan
This taxodium is really the most impressive I've seen, but in my picture, Gui is with silvery hair less.
Hug´s,
Fabiano
Hug´s,
Fabiano
Fabianoscosta- Member
Re: Taxodium chokkan
Twister is indeed impressive.
Another impressive one is the Sentinel, now in the collection of Ronn Miller, Florida.
Another impressive one is the Sentinel, now in the collection of Ronn Miller, Florida.
Rob Kempinski- Member
Re: Taxodium chokkan
Even more impressive is the setting for "The Sentinel".Rob Kempinski wrote:Twister is indeed impressive.
Another impressive one is the Sentinel, now in the collection of Ronn Miller, Florida.
Alan Walker- Member
Re: Taxodium chokkan
And I see that "The Sentinel" is a place where she likes a lot, considering the high humidity and environment in which it is included.
Regards,
Fabiano.
Regards,
Fabiano.
Fabianoscosta- Member
Chokkan is difficult with Taxodium
A young tree of Bald cypress maybe more appropriated in Chokkan Style.
But the nebary is irregular root distribuition.
But the nebary is irregular root distribuition.
Chaddad- Member
Re: Taxodium chokkan
Hello Chaddad how are you?
Really in young trees, if you have not given much luck in finding good material already a nebari Interestingly, the big deal is trying to make one, this is my project with the structure of this plant.
She was so in October this year.
Hug´s (abração)
Fabiano.
Really in young trees, if you have not given much luck in finding good material already a nebari Interestingly, the big deal is trying to make one, this is my project with the structure of this plant.
She was so in October this year.
Hug´s (abração)
Fabiano.
Fabianoscosta- Member
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