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Post  Milan Karpíšek Sat Jul 31, 2010 5:26 pm

hi all,
this is yamadori sabina from mountain, it is very old and famous material.The plant has huge potential to provide the tribe with lots of dead and rotten lot of dead wood. Interesting is also the lower part of the portfolio, which will be cut off or left on. As soon as I looked at the plant was unclear how we turn out and shaping my vision was clear. With the shape I'm very happy, although the green fuel was to be as good as I had imagined, he has managed to create a beautiful tree, which is certainly not lost in the future. more on my website http://www.niwatobonsai.estranky.cz/fotoalbum/nezarazene/sabina-babka

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Post  Guest Sat Jul 31, 2010 6:00 pm

Good work Milan. Sabinas are taking over from Chinensis fast!! Whats your potting plan with this one?

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Post  Walter Pall Sat Jul 31, 2010 6:54 pm

Good, Milan.
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Post  Milan Karpíšek Sat Jul 31, 2010 8:40 pm

Will, thank you
potting plan? Maybe on the rock or shell, I dont know now.

Thank you Walter, I appreciate it.
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Post  Pavel Slovák Sat Jul 31, 2010 9:33 pm

Hi Milan.

Nice work. Congratulations. Very Happy

Very nice, interesing and dynamic trunk. ThumbsUp
But, Treetop I tried more in the nature of the tribe. Very Happy

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Post  Guest Sun Aug 01, 2010 12:21 am

There is one thing I'm bothered by and its the horizontal jin on the left. It seems overly heavy and distracts the eye.

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Post  Milan Karpíšek Sun Aug 01, 2010 7:50 am

in real the jin is ok, But it will be slightly refined in the future
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Post  Milan Karpíšek Sun Aug 01, 2010 5:58 pm

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Post  luc tran Mon Aug 02, 2010 5:53 am

Great looking tree. Just a thought. If I used my imaginary power and put a scholar underneath the first pad of foliage, (in propotion to the tree of course) then the left jin would be extremely awkwardly long. i think if you shorten it a little, then slant the tree to the right a bit to counterbalance the center of mass, I think that would be ideal.

Sorry dont have program to make a virtual. Anyone want to do that please feel free. Smile I'd like to see my image come true. Just another option. Great looking tree one more time.

BTW, I was referencing the virtual by Milan for my image.

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Post  tim stubbs Mon Aug 02, 2010 7:40 am

i think the jin adds to the tree , it woulld be a shame to get rid ofit because of convention
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Post  Guest Mon Aug 02, 2010 10:58 am

tim stubbs wrote:i think the jin adds to the tree , it woulld be a shame to get rid ofit because of convention

Get rid of it? Dont think that has been suggested. I said it was overly heavy thats all. A reduction in thickness would solve the problem.

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Post  ybonsai Mon Aug 02, 2010 11:35 pm

Nice improvement!

But the tree deserves a great pot for it instead of a slab. (if it is possible with the roots.)

Or maybe a nice ibigawa rock that fits the tree with some plants that makes it a great composition.

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Post  Justin Hervey Tue Aug 03, 2010 8:22 am

Milan, your vision for this tree is the right one for my taste, removing the base jin would make it like so many other specimens, whereas with the right rock/slab for planting, you have an image that is totally unique.

Great job.
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Post  Milan Karpíšek Tue Aug 03, 2010 8:36 pm

Thanks for your encouraging comments and suggestions! For the time being I am convinced to keep the base jin, however, I might change my mind in future, we´ll see, maybe some minor changes and of course a refinement will be made. Yanick, what do you mean by "ibigawa" stone? Could you, please, virtualize your idea, if possible?
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