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Post  Pavel Slovák Wed Apr 14, 2010 9:34 pm

Hi all friends.

Today I visited a client. He brought the first styling two large trees. Look what happened. Smile

Pine
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Post  F. Waheedy Wed Apr 14, 2010 10:02 pm

Beautiful, as always. Hats off to you, Pavel.
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Post  Joao Santos Wed Apr 14, 2010 10:05 pm

A fantastic job as you got us used too! Smile

Congratulations

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Post  anttal63 Wed Apr 14, 2010 10:50 pm

Very nice Pavel! This client must be very happy. cheers
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Post  Velodog2 Thu Apr 15, 2010 3:08 am

Wow. Both great.

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Post  Guest Thu Apr 15, 2010 3:56 am

Great work again Pavel. Can't quite work out whats going on with the bottom left branch on the Pine. Doesn't seem to fit in with the rest of the tree.

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Post  Hombre Fri Apr 16, 2010 9:56 pm

Absolutly fantastic job Pavel as always bounce bounce bounce
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Post  littleart-fx Sat Apr 17, 2010 12:41 am

Pavel.

You must enjoy life as it is!
Sharing them images witch go true your hands (read trees) how nice!

@Will (hahaha wats in words Very Happy ) cutting of would do the pine good....i'd say for now gone is relay gone.
i am at that stage,...still... Wink


grtz machiel!
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Post  Guest Sun Apr 18, 2010 11:30 pm

Hello Pavel. with the Larch, I would consider losing the large branch on the left. It lacks the character the rest of the tree exhibits and is out of scale. Lovely tree though. Pine  and Larch. Icon_biggrin

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Post  Pavel Slovák Mon Apr 19, 2010 6:58 am

Hi Faisal, Joao, Antonio, Velodog, Will, Hombre, Machiel.

Thank you all for your very nice comments. I'm happy. Very Happy Very Happy

re:Will - Yes, I agree with the left lower pine branches. Is too strong in the future will probably be removed. Very Happy Wink

In Larch but remains. Very Happy I like the extended arm. In the next idle period will be a movement, is too flat. The Larch is a very impressive tree. Very Happy

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Post  Pavel Slovák Wed Mar 09, 2011 7:01 pm

Hi all

Today I worked on the restyling of Larch. The owner is my client. I think the tree is a step forward. Very Happy

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Post  peter keane Wed Mar 09, 2011 7:24 pm

just a thought.......

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Post  moyogijohn Wed Mar 09, 2011 10:41 pm

You have worked some very nice trees!! On the last larch my opion only I would shorten the left bottom branch some it looks a little longto me...no matter you did a good job...take care john

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Post  zooloo10 Thu Mar 10, 2011 1:50 am

@peter, without that branch there i find the tree has a large void and the balance in it is gone, i looked at it and it looked like the tree was almost ready to fall over, i agree the branch needs to be reduced or a new one grown in its place, but something has to be in that spot... just my input

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Post  Pavel Slovák Thu Mar 10, 2011 6:45 am

Hi Peter

thank you for your nice the virtual. But the branch still remains. Wink
Pavel

Hi John
thank you for your nice replies Very Happy .
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Hi zooloo
Thanks for your comments and interesting account. Very Happy
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Post  Morea Thu Mar 10, 2011 8:14 am

Dear Pavel

The larch is very beautiful !!
I like it with the long branch to the left.
Also like it in a shallow pot .

You style is getting stronger and stronger , super !!
A smile and hug for You Very Happy
Kind regards
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Post  davemac Thu Mar 10, 2011 8:45 am


Hi
If you intend to keep the long branch on the left as a suggestion could you not bring some movement into it. Question

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Post  my nellie Thu Mar 10, 2011 11:48 am

Bravo, Pavel!

I do like the branch to the left but I second the above quotation:
davemac wrote:
... ... could you not bring some movement into it. Question
Perhaps it is too straight I could say....


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Post  jupp Thu Mar 10, 2011 12:13 pm

As always, a very great job Pavel.
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Post  Tom Benda Thu Mar 10, 2011 4:38 pm

my nellie wrote:
I do like the branch to the left but I second the above quotation:
davemac wrote:
... ... could you not bring some movement into it. Question
Perhaps it is too straight I could say....

The branch can be replaced by the other growing out of the same spot. There are at least three branches. That´s too much. It can damage such a beautiful (and non-straight Smile ) trunk.

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Post  Pavel Slovák Thu Mar 10, 2011 10:53 pm

Thank you all for yours nice coment and compliments.
The tree will still work. Long left branch of the tree remains. I think it is very significant and interesting. Yes, you will need to highlight the movement. In this we agree with the owner. But it again next time. Very Happy

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Post  Pavel Slovák Thu Jul 14, 2011 8:31 pm

Hi all

New pot and foto today. Very Happy
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Post  DaveV. Thu Jul 14, 2011 10:23 pm

I also agree. The branch should stay.

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Post  marcus watts Thu Jul 14, 2011 10:41 pm

hi, with the larch i also think the branch should stay - but it is too flat and too straight - the trunk has graceful movement - the branch needs the same movement to convince the viewer that both are part of the same tree, until then it is a mixture of nature (the trunk), and man made (the branch)

the pine is just the client being cruel, or testing you !! Laughing Laughing the trunk has the bulges and straight sections with no taper -if i didnt plant it in the garden i would look to reduce the height a lot, using one of the lower branches as an apex curving over, then, with 5-6 years of growing the foliage it will be a better looking tree. the bottom branch is not pleasing to the eye though - a part of it goes straight up and another part looks to cross the back of the trunk, but it was a difficult tree to try and make a bonsai image from - well done and very nice drawing ! Wink
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Post  Rob C Thu Jul 14, 2011 11:15 pm

Both trees are magnificent! .. I especially love the pine.. a beautiful elegant, yet strong trunk..

As far as shortening or removing branches on the Larch.. Although it is outstanding the way it is. I think that it might not be about the branches, but perhaps the planting angle. I hope you don't mind, but I did a virt with the tree tilted slightly and the thick branch reduced just a little bit. I really don't know if it makes the tree any better, but it is different.As I said earlier, the tree is already outstanding.. What do you think?

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