my bonsai ..i from Viêt Nam.

centimet Fri Dec 14, 2012 8:21 am

hello all.

I'm from Vietnam , I have work a little bonsai tree, I want to sharing ...

thank 4 all ( I do not know much about english .. please !)

my bonsai ..i from Viêt Nam. 5-22_zps6777782e

my bonsai ..i from Viêt Nam. 4-20_zpsf9d833b9

my bonsai ..i from Viêt Nam. 1-22_zpsdc006af1

my bonsai ..i from Viêt Nam. 9-9_zps39effd48

trân trọng!

Guest Fri Dec 14, 2012 10:14 am

Good experiment!
Welcome to IBC...

regards,
jun Smile

Robert Steven Fri Dec 14, 2012 12:25 pm

jun wrote:Good experiment!
Welcome to IBC...

regards,
jun

Yes, welcome Trong..
BTW, the pot seems to be a nice unique pot, was it broken by accident or purposely ? pale

What a pity....

centimet Fri Dec 14, 2012 12:27 pm

@ jun: thank you... Razz

the new tree ..hihi

my bonsai ..i from Viêt Nam. 88_zpsaa754d11

trân trọng
Centimet

centimet Fri Dec 14, 2012 1:00 pm

sorry sir.. , My name is Phước ..Trân trọng ( vietnammese) = regards .
the pot is accident .

Hi robert, I'm a fan of him, I admire his knowledge communicated in the past visits to Vietnam, thank you for what he has brought to our people vietnam
I thought his style influence, look forward to his comments on this work
Thank you very much.
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my bonsai ..i from Viêt Nam. 1-22_zpsdc006af1

Trân trọng = regards

Centimet

centimet Fri Dec 14, 2012 1:13 pm

hi all..

trân trọng
Centimet

Robert Steven Fri Dec 14, 2012 2:05 pm

centimet wrote:sorry sir.. , My name is Phước ..Trân trọng ( vietnammese) = regards .
the pot is accident .

Hi robert, I'm a fan of him, I admire his knowledge communicated in the past visits to Vietnam, thank you for what he has brought to our people vietnam
I thought his style influence, look forward to his comments on this work
Thank you very much.
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Trân trọng = regards

Centimet

...Opps ! Sorry Phuoc, and now I remember you. It was my pleasure to share experiences with you, and I had a great time with you all in Vietnam.

Since you ask for comment..then please allow me to say something...

The broken pot is nice, but you put too many different things to it, the different rocks, the flowers/grass, the slab..they are all giving different characters without unity and integrity, yet, they also take over the focal point from the tree itself.
The size and shape of the tree does not fit to the pot. The tree is too small and I think a slanting or semi cascade tree will fit better...

Keep going anyway.... cheers

And for your last tree. I like it very much, a nice literati ! I prefer the pose of the first photo with slighly slanting to the left, the last photo is too stright that doesn't demonstrate the dynamic line. Laughing

centimet Fri Dec 14, 2012 2:18 pm

Robert Steven wrote:
centimet wrote:sorry sir.. , My name is Phước ..Trân trọng ( vietnammese) = regards .
the pot is accident .

Hi robert, I'm a fan of him, I admire his knowledge communicated in the past visits to Vietnam, thank you for what he has brought to our people vietnam
I thought his style influence, look forward to his comments on this work
Thank you very much.
[center]

Trân trọng = regards

Centimet

...Opps ! Sorry Phuoc, and now I remember you. It was my pleasure to share experiences with you, and I had a great time with you all in Vietnam.

Since you ask for comment..then please allow me to say something...

The broken pot is nice, but you put too many different things to it, the different rocks, the flowers/grass, the slab..they are all giving different characters without unity and integrity, yet, they also take over the focal point from the tree itself.
The size and shape of the tree does not fit to the pot. The tree is too small and I think a slanting or semi cascade tree will fit better...

Keep going anyway....

And for your last tree. I like it very much, a nice literati ! I prefer the pose of the first photo with slighly slanting to the left, the last photo is too stright that doesn't demonstrate the dynamic line.