Pinus silvestris

I finished forming my pinus

Do you have some suggestions?
Can you propose pot?

Very nice Rafal, very.

Did you consider a remove of right side branch?
Maybe after that, you can use a flat, wide pot and place a pine in center?
From where you collected such a good pine ?

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Hi,
This right side branch is root. Later I will make of him the jin or I cut off him.
I collected this pine from my forest in central Poland.
abcd,
Thank You for virtual. This is very good idea.

Can you propose pot?

I don't know how are the roots, but a smallest pot , with curving edges will be better, but, is it possible ? virtual pot.
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Although it would hurt me, I'd get rid of the trunk on the left.

Two (too) different styles.

Cześć Alain,
Bonsai has unique character now and I will not cut off this left branch.
I think that this is good bonsai. He has a lot of natural dead wood on both branches

Rafal Kulesza wrote:I finished forming my pinus
Do you have some suggestions?
Can you propose pot?

no, and, no

i quite like it the way it is. Yes you could play with the trunk line, but if a tree looks good the way it is...why feel the need to do anything more than that? I dont think it alters the quality... yes, its all a bit nearer to each other but is it necessary to produce a stronger/better feel to the tree? I think it breathes elegancy allready, a tall elegant and pride lady.

And i would certainly not pick a much smaller pot. The tree can use the pot as it is, while it gets potbound and you fertilize and water it properly, it can take on more leaf/needles... If you have a fuller crown that smaller pot will look totally out of place.

Would it be a crime?




with best wishes
rasto

I tell you what rasto, I personaly like the virtual

Hi Rasto,
I thank for Your very nice virt but I do not want to cut off this trunk.

Hi Rafal,
It was just an idea
As Alain wrote - two different styles of trunk - a bit distracting me too.
But if it was mine, I probably wouldn´t be so brave to cut it

Hi Rafal,

thanks for sharing this interesting pine. I think cutting off either of the trunks would be a terrible mistake - it's the two trunks that make the tree stand out and interesting. I would personally try to toy with the taller trunk's crown and make it more dynamic and corresponding with the smaller trunk, also, imho, the tree would benefit from a less obvious triangle composition. That said, from what I understand it's the tree's aragake and it is a very good one - a great job you did there. I'm looking forward to see the tree's next styling. Have you taken a photo of the tree before its styling? All best!

giomach wrote:I think cutting off either of the trunks would be a terrible mistake - it's the two trunks that make the tree stand out and interesting.

I think so same.

giomach wrote:Have you taken a photo of the tree before its styling?

I on Polish forum:
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shew this tree's history.
First bonsai foto

Especially now that I see what you guys have started with... NO CUTTING NO NOTHING

Best...

Gašper

I think that you do not see what work was made
First forming had on destination on very difficult curve left branch. Nothing be cutting!

After first forming pine looked so as lower down:


this was in June 2007.

After cutting off old needles

I really like the tree. It really demonstrates the uniqueness of design, time and weather can impose on a piece of material. I believe, and this is just my opinion, doing anything to drastically alter this tree by removing one or other of the two trunks would be border-line criminal. Nature offered up this tree and when it was harvested I believe that a commitment was made to preserve what it is.

I thank very much Vance. This is the "edifying" opinion