My mini chop stick....
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bacruongbonsai
dorothy7774
Billy M. Rhodes
Smithy
marcus watts
mbolos
LELE
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Re: My mini chop stick....
Very nice. One thought, in the last juniper you pictured, I would alter the jin in the upper right so that it doesn't come across your trunk line. Either move it off to the right (which might disturb that right-to-let semi-windswept look you're going for) or shorten it.
Thanks for sharing.
Thanks for sharing.
mbolos- Member
Re: My mini chop stick....
Hi,
I would compact the upper trunk some more to complete the powerfull juniper image - the crown and the trunk appear too seperated and a bit unbalanced atm.
in my virt i've just dropped the entire crown down and added a shari to join up all the jin stubs- this also brings the movement in the trunk alive. Then i used the curved pot to match a curved tree, grew the lowest branch a little and layered it a bit.
Excelent tree, especially from what you started with
cheers Marcus
I would compact the upper trunk some more to complete the powerfull juniper image - the crown and the trunk appear too seperated and a bit unbalanced atm.
in my virt i've just dropped the entire crown down and added a shari to join up all the jin stubs- this also brings the movement in the trunk alive. Then i used the curved pot to match a curved tree, grew the lowest branch a little and layered it a bit.
Excelent tree, especially from what you started with
cheers Marcus
marcus watts- Member
Re: My mini chop stick....
Thanks Guys, the virtual looks good, i will definitely try to compact the tree and remove the little jin on the right
LELE- Member
Re: My mini chop stick....
Hi Lele , i really like this little tree. I like it with the virt and shari added . I personally like the top jin coming across the trunk.
Smithy- Member
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Hi Smithy thank you, the top jin is gone i`ve compacted the tree and you you couldn`t even see it so i cut it off....is looking good for a little mini
LELE- Member
Re: My mini chop stick....
LELE wrote:I`m in Mebourne Smithy
Florida, USA or Australia?
Billy M. Rhodes- Member
Re: My mini chop stick....
And as for the stick? Yakitori stick. A useful item. Yakitori= skewered chicken. Yum!
Bruce Winter- Member
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