juniperus chinensis--->>>>>>>> evolution of a Juniperus chinensis over 3 years.

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Post  Morgan on Sat Nov 12, 2011 10:30 pm

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Post  marcus watts on Sat Nov 12, 2011 10:35 pm

thats going in the right direction - but lots of straight lines jump out at me....a few more soft curves in the trunk and branches will mirror the foliage really well.

fantastic new growth to the foliage pads tho, really good

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Post  Spidercrab on Sun Nov 13, 2011 12:05 am

This tree has potential but it must look like nature designed it and not us.Wind,rain,snow strong sunlight drought,all of these

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Post  Bob Pressler on Sun Nov 13, 2011 2:57 am

Nice development in three years. With some refining and a little bit of time you'll have a really nice tree.

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Post  Morgan on Tue Dec 27, 2011 1:13 pm

merci pour vos avis très éclairés.

Nouvelle formation

I still have to work on dead wood

Vos avis?


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Post  dorothy7774 on Tue Dec 27, 2011 10:29 pm

Nice! Not sure if you need the lower branch. What do you think:






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Post  coh on Tue Dec 27, 2011 10:34 pm

Removing the lower branch was also my initial reaction, and Dorothy's virtuals seem to support that (at least to my eye). Could probably train one of the other branches down into that area if you feel the need for foliage there...but that current branch looks too "clunky" and comes off the trunk in a strange location.

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Post  Rob Kempinski on Tue Dec 27, 2011 11:47 pm

Another idea. Maybe too radical but that straight upper trunk is ???


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Post  Guest on Wed Dec 28, 2011 2:43 pm

Hi Morgan.
I think the problem with your tree is the position/inclination of the trunk, It seems to be un balanced and falling down instead of just leaning a bit. and the unbalanced and heavy appearance were made heavier by the foliage pad formation riding to much on top of the leaning trunk.

My suggestion is nothing drastic, just minor adjustment of the leaning trunk to the right side. and then form some movement (horizontal) of the foliage pads to the left side, then create a deadwood/shari on the trunk to give some interest on the rather straight trunk.

just my opinion.




The pot would also affect the image portrayed...ordinary pot and not long enough would change the balance too. Slab would also look good.

regards,
jun Smile

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Post  Klaudia & Martin on Wed Dec 28, 2011 5:12 pm

Hello Morgan

To me it has to much deadwood....but thats only MHO.
I personally would bend the straight part of the trunk first and than rethink the design again.
There's no need to hurry.

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Martin

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