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Post  lnvinh Sat Nov 06, 2010 12:39 am

Tray 40 x 70 cm:

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Post  Neil Jaeger Sat Nov 06, 2010 1:49 pm

Wow, great tree. Love the trunk movement and the rocks. Just lovely.
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Post  bonsaisr Sat Nov 06, 2010 3:14 pm

Although I love your work, I have a problem with this landscape. The canopy is very formal Japanese style, and doesn't seem to go with the contorted trunk and rugged rocks. I would prefer a more sparse, informal looking canopy.
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Post  shimsuki Sun Nov 07, 2010 12:52 am

In my opinion, you need to:

1.) Start developing some pads
2.) Carve some shari on that trunk to bring out the twists and the eye look at the trunk more, rather than the eye either getting distracted by the foliage mass or the rock.

Looks like of a great piece of material to work with!

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Andrew
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