Expert suggestion for my Cascade bonsai

Dear experts

I am trying to make my 1st Cascade bonsai of Syzygium cumini unfortunately I don't have digital camera but I create an illustration with labels of my bonsais which is 90% similar to original one.

Please suggest me how to improve my Cascade bonsai?

Thanks

Do you have a camera on your phone that you could use as it would be far better for people to see the actual tree before commenting?

I think you are not satisfy with my illustration  

Ishkan,

Doing virtual/or sketch suggestion from pictures is not that easy...Doing it based on your flat illustration would more difficult and very inaccurate.


regards,
jun:) 

Your illustration gives no idea of what the branches are actually like - e.g. is there any dieback or deadwood etc. or are there any buds popping along the branches.   We could give you great illustrations back but we might be wasting your time by suggesting you do something with a branch that isn't going to be viable.

from the rough picture here is a rough idea of a cascade you could maybe achieve, if all goes well and it is healthy & vigorous, and you are able to do the right techniques when needed



cheers, good luck  

Hi Marcus

Thanks for your suggestion it gives me good idea. what is the goal.