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Larix - restyyling - before and after 2012

Post  Pavel Slovák on Thu Mar 29, 2012 9:27 pm

Hi all
Today I worked on the restyling of Larix.
before

and after


Gretings Pavel
more pict.: http://www.bonsaivigi.cz/fotoalbum/tvarovani-a-vyvoj---styling-and-development/larix---restyling-2012--majitel-m.sulak-/
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Re: Larix - restyyling - before and after 2012

Post  chris on Thu Mar 29, 2012 9:38 pm

Great job Pavel, I love Larch

Regards Chris
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Re: Larix - restyyling - before and after 2012

Post  Lukasz Czarnecki on Fri Mar 30, 2012 7:22 pm

As always great job Pavel.
Can you tell me what camera you use to photo of your bonsai?
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Re: Larix - restyyling - before and after 2012

Post  Pavel Slovák on Fri Mar 30, 2012 7:37 pm

Hi Chris, thank you for your nice coments. Very Happy
Gretings Pavel

Hi Lukasz
Thank you for nice replies. Very Happy
I used Sony DSC HX 1, my friend, the device also Nikon, unfortunately I do not know the type. Embarassed

Gretings Pavel
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Re: Larix - restyyling - before and after 2012

Post  DangerousBry on Fri Mar 30, 2012 8:54 pm

Stunning tree!!
It's unfortunate the branch 3/4 up the top crosses the trunk line it's visually distracting. However removed, i fear it would possibly ruin the whole composition, any thoughts on this??

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Re: Larix - restyyling - before and after 2012

Post  crust on Fri Mar 30, 2012 9:50 pm

I feel the crossing branch, while may have been necessary at one time, is no longer, and detracts from the dynamism of the lower major branch it mirrors. It is a beauty of a Larch.

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Re: Larix - restyyling - before and after 2012

Post  DangerousBry on Mon Apr 02, 2012 8:03 pm

crust wrote:I feel the crossing branch, while may have been necessary at one time, is no longer, and detracts from the dynamism of the lower major branch it mirrors. It is a beauty of a Larch.

Hi Pavel....
I think Crust and i had a similar though.... Would it not be possible to build up the back branch and create a similar image to my virtual???




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Re: Larix - restyyling - before and after 2012

Post  Pavel Slovák on Mon Apr 02, 2012 10:09 pm

Thank you Bryan for your nice virtual.
Yes, it is possible. But maybe next time. Very Happy

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Re: Larix - restyyling - before and after 2012

Post  marcus watts on Mon Apr 02, 2012 10:45 pm

hi,
i feel the tree could be much better moving the other way now the lower branch is gone.

The main branch comes from inside a curve and looks wrong, while the branch on the right is very well placed and just needs to grow longer. further up the tree the apex actually moves to the right as well, but it too is made unstable because all the branches are styled the opposite way.

For me the tree has two strong elements going to the right and would be much better if the branches complement them - and even more so that the ugly branch bent across the trunk could be put back on its proper side as it only makes a fake image for the camera. I think if you look at the tree as material rather than bonsai these are quite obvious things you would do in a first styling. With the trunk leaned to the right as well the tree will be very nice.

cheers Marcus
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larix

Post  abcd on Tue Apr 03, 2012 5:49 am

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Re: Larix - restyyling - before and after 2012

Post  cram on Tue Apr 03, 2012 7:17 am

i like the tree with the left lowest branch
this branch give all the power to the tree...for me

if really you don t want to get some opposite branches ..i think itis better to leave the right lowest one..even if it is more in the "rules"

great work pavel
...as usually Wink
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Re: Larix - restyyling - before and after 2012

Post  Pavel Slovák on Thu Feb 07, 2013 8:35 pm

Hi all

Today I worked restyling this tree.

before


after


Greetings Pavel
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Re: Larix - restyyling - before and after 2012

Post  AdamJonas on Thu Feb 07, 2013 8:44 pm

Pavel, I like it o lot!
I do like larches Smile
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Re: Larix - restyyling - before and after 2012

Post  Vance Wood on Fri Feb 08, 2013 3:32 am

Personally I like the tree a lot. It may have some issues that seem to violate "The Rules" but I don't know how many times we have had heated debates over the validity of "The Rules". After some of the virtuals that have been made, as good as they are, it is pretty obvious that removing, changing and relocating branches to make this tree conform to "The Rules" leaves us with a sort of uninteresting tree; correct by the numbers but lacking it's beautiful uniqueness. It is for this reason that Yamadori are not always considered, judged, and critiqued by "The Rules". The character this tree has is in the fact that nature provided the character in the first place. Remove any of this and the tree is no longer the beautiful Yamadori it was/is. Just my humble and probably meaningless opinion.
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Re: Larix - restyyling - before and after 2012

Post  Pavel Slovák on Fri Feb 08, 2013 6:28 am



foto Josef Vrážel



Greetings Pavel
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