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Itoigawa - first styling

Post  Pavel Slovák on Mon Jan 09, 2012 2:58 pm

Hi all
Another Itoigawa waits for the first styling. Many healthy branches. You can see part of the trunk and Sari. It will be interesting to see what is hidden in this tree. Very Happy



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Re: Itoigawa - first styling

Post  Pavel Slovák on Mon Jan 09, 2012 8:14 pm


Next step.
The tree I gradually removed a few awkward branches. Cleaned tribe. At the bottom I found a very interesting branch.



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Re: Itoigawa - first styling

Post  Pavel Slovák on Tue Jan 10, 2012 5:07 pm

Another photo.


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Re: Itoigawa - first styling

Post  Pavel Slovák on Tue Jan 10, 2012 6:22 pm

Hi all friends
End of the first styling. Very Happy




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more pict.: http://www.bonsaivigi.cz/fotoalbum/tvarovani-a-vyvoj---styling-and-development/juniperus-ch.-itoigawa-2012---first-styling/

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Re: Itoigawa - first styling

Post  Luis Nbt on Tue Jan 10, 2012 7:06 pm

Great job and great way to design the tree.

I am new at bonsai but let me tell you, that I've learned more reading this forum than in two years of books Very Happy because of the practical and so varied examples.

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Re: Itoigawa - first styling

Post  Smithy on Tue Jan 10, 2012 7:44 pm

Love that one Pavel

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Re: Itoigawa - first styling

Post  LSBonsai on Tue Jan 10, 2012 8:30 pm

Very nice touch Pavel, but I feel that there is some confusion with the movement of the tree. The apex moves to the left, but the overall movement of the tree is heavily to the right.

I think the apex needs to be adjusted more to the right to balance the image out. Just my humble suggestion.

Thank you for sharing Smile

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Re: Itoigawa - first styling

Post  Pavel Slovák on Tue Jan 10, 2012 9:09 pm

Hi Luis , Smithy and a2khalid
Thank you for yours nice coments and compliments. Very Happy

a2khalid - Compose leave as is. Unfortunately the photo does not show the whole trunk of the tree at the bottom. Clogs on the front edge of the bowl. Trunk begins in fact more on the left side. The top of the tree is now located on the right side enough. It's ending a rotating trunk. Slide the top even more to the right side of the tree out of the wilderness harmonnické contrast and dynamic balance. Too weighted edge of the bowl after transplanting future. Compositionally I am very satisfied in reality. Very Happy
I hope you understand. Very Happy Wink

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Re: Itoigawa - first styling

Post  LSBonsai on Tue Jan 10, 2012 9:15 pm

Ah I understand. If the nebari is further to the left, it will certainly balance out the composition.

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Re: Itoigawa - first styling

Post  Andreasdeutscher on Wed Jan 11, 2012 11:18 am

Pavel Slovák wrote:
Next step.
The tree I gradually removed a few awkward branches. Cleaned tribe. At the bottom I found a very interesting branch.



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[u]
Do you mean some wallachian tribal rites, Pavel? Very Happy

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Re: Itoigawa - first styling

Post  Pavel Slovák on Wed Jan 11, 2012 11:58 am

Very Happy Nejen Valašské Ondro.

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Re: Itoigawa - first styling

Post  Rob Kempinski on Wed Jan 11, 2012 1:28 pm

Hi Pavel,

Nice work.

Pavel Slovák wrote: Very Happy Nejen Valašské Ondro.

I've always wondered what you mean by "tribe" and "strain" This explains it perfectly???? Rolling Eyes

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Re: Itoigawa - first styling

Post  Andreasdeutscher on Wed Jan 11, 2012 1:38 pm

It is a little mistake - tribe,trunk and strain are homonyms in czech.

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Re: Itoigawa - first styling

Post  Rob Kempinski on Wed Jan 11, 2012 1:48 pm

Andreasdeutscher wrote:It is a little mistake - tribe,trunk and strain are homonyms in czech.

Now I understand. Thanks.

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Re: Itoigawa - first styling

Post  Pavel Slovák on Wed Jan 11, 2012 2:21 pm

Thank you very much Rob. Very Happy
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Re: Itoigawa - first styling

Post  Pavel Slovák on Wed Jan 11, 2012 8:10 pm

Hi all
One more photo. Also for a2khalid.
The red line shows the left edge of the trunk.


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Re: Itoigawa - first styling

Post  eric sanders on Wed Jan 11, 2012 8:46 pm

hello pavel,
It,s a nice transformation but in mine opinion the top off the tree is going to the left (movement) and the rest is going to the right.
i placed a photo off what i mean. just a idea!!!!!!!!!!!! Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy

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Re: Itoigawa - first styling

Post  DangerousBry on Wed Jan 11, 2012 8:52 pm

eric sanders wrote:hello pavel,
It,s a nice transformation but in mine opinion the top off the tree is going to the left (movement) and the rest is going to the right.
i placed a photo off what i mean. just a idea!!!!!!!!!!!! :D :D :D

Hi Pavel
Great tree..... I was also playing around with a copy of the photo today, and Eric's picture was almostnexactly the same as what I had in my minds eye!!

Cheers
Bryan

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Re: Itoigawa - first styling

Post  Pavel Slovák on Wed Jan 11, 2012 8:59 pm

Hi Eric and Bryan
Thank you for nice replies and yours virtual. Very Happy
Unfortunately, the tree would come to a very dynamic part. The picture still distorts small portion of cutting down the branches on the trunk. In the spring after transplanting will see everything. Thanks guys. Very Happy

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