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Post  pbh on Fri Nov 04, 2011 9:50 am

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Post  coh on Sun Nov 06, 2011 4:14 pm

I see this was your first post to the forum, so welcome! Hopefully you'll be a regular participant.

I like what you've done with the upper-right part of the tree, but am not sure about the branch that comes down on the left. Looks a little heavy to me and the alignment of the branch with the upper branch makes almost a perfect T shape. I did a quick photoshop to see what it looks like without that branch:



Just something to consider. Obviously the foliage mass will be further developed, maybe a branch can eventually be brought down to the lower left from the upper segment to give some of the original effect without that heavy branch segment?

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Post  fiona on Sun Nov 06, 2011 4:20 pm

Hi and welcome to the forum.

I tend to agree with Chris. But, and this is a long shot, is it possible to take a picture from the other side? Just a hunch I have.

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Post  cram on Wed Nov 09, 2011 8:32 pm

another strange possibility

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Post  sunip on Wed Nov 09, 2011 8:49 pm

Hello,

Yes that is where i was thinking of Cram,
Coh's version is nice but also to obvious.
Good luck with it PBH.
Regards. Sunip Wink

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Post  coh on Wed Nov 09, 2011 9:37 pm

That's not bad (Cram's virt)...anything to break up that "T" shape would be helpful. Also, with all the wrapping and wire on the trunk/branches, it's hard to tell exactly how thick each is. The original image gives the impression that the lower left branch is very thick which is part of what I was reacting to...probably will look more in scale when the wrappings come off.

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Post  Hans van Meer. on Wed Nov 09, 2011 9:46 pm

Hi PBH,
welcome here on IBC. That's a brave transformation that you made on your Pine. And I do understand what you were aiming for, but there is something wrong with the balance on your Pine. When you tilt the tree to the right, like you did, the left bottom branch becomes to long and heavy, creating a dis balance in your otherwise good design. If hope you dont mind, that I made a virtual of your pine that I would like to show. I used all your branches and sticked to your design, I only changed the angle of your tree to the left side, instead of to the right side. Something like my virtual could make your design more balanced. And that left branch looks more in it's place and it now helps to almost push up the whole tree upwards.

Just a idea! Smile
Hope to see the progress of this tree in the future! Very Happy
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Post  Hans van Meer. on Wed Nov 09, 2011 9:55 pm

cram wrote:another strange possibility

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AAARRRGGG! Cram! Evil or Very Mad
You beat me to it! Very Happy Wile I was making my version, you posted yours......and your version looks much better! thumbs up
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Post  cram on Thu Nov 10, 2011 7:23 am

Very Happy ...
bah....it s maybe only mean that drawing is still faster than computer?

funny..it s really the same idea....and i m not as sure than you that mine is better
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Post  pbh on Thu Nov 10, 2011 2:09 pm

thank's for your interest!
I understand the probleme of balance on my tree.
there's not a lot of things to modify to regulate.
I really see a good evolution of my pine on your virtual Hans, I'm happy to see what i wasn't far on my first transformation!
I also like cram's virtual but i think it's too "minimalist" for the moment, that's the first tree of this type witch i work and my competences are very limited!



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Post  pbh on Thu Nov 10, 2011 2:17 pm

the others sides for Fiona
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Post  pbh on Tue Nov 15, 2011 10:08 am

small modification
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Post  pbh on Thu Dec 20, 2012 7:52 am

some news, it will be repot next year, wich pot, that's the question?

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Post  pbh on Fri Jul 05, 2013 3:21 pm

today

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Post  pbh on Fri Nov 15, 2013 10:55 am

i've change the face


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Post  fiona on Fri Nov 15, 2013 12:26 pm

That was the very view I'd wondered about previously.  

I like what you are doing and look forward to pics of the tree's continuing development.  Very Happy


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Post  JimLewis on Fri Nov 15, 2013 12:45 pm

Lovely upper half. Too much of a mound of soil at the bottom.

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Post  pbh on Fri Nov 15, 2013 5:04 pm

thank's

it will be better next repotting!

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Post  AlainK on Fri Nov 15, 2013 5:49 pm

coh wrote:(...)I did a quick photoshop to see what it looks like without that branch:

Chris
I second that opinion: I would think about jinning it out maybe.

Based on Cram's virt:



But you've done a lot of very good work so far anyway.
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Post  pbh on Tue Mar 25, 2014 4:48 pm

i've cut a part of the branch
and wired the top for the face changing


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Post  Vance Wood on Tue Mar 25, 2014 7:54 pm

Very nice tree. I would have liked to have seen it against a neutral background that did not clutter up the image. From this point of view it seems to have a slight reverse taper.
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Post  AlainK on Wed Mar 26, 2014 10:09 am

Biautifoul! The kind of tree I really like. thumbs up 
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Post  pbh on Wed Mar 26, 2014 12:47 pm

thank's for my tree!
I want a pot that it will go better, I make pottery for some time,
if someone has an idea, I am interested in your opinion.

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