Awful or Awesome 2 ?

Hi pals,
Hope you don't mind I post another "Awful or Awesome" to look for improvement.





Any criticism is just welcome.
Thanks

As I am sure you know, Wrightii bud out very easily and quickly, so I think I would remove all but a few branches and rebuild the structure,

It's awfully "regular," -- like a pagoda. Maybe you can at least make it alternate from side to side, rather than all around the tree.

yeah thats kissing "topiary" in my opinion....alternate the branching