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Post  czerniachowski on Fri Sep 03, 2010 9:02 am

Hi all!!
This is my last work.Yamadori from Poland
Regards Piotr
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Post  alex e on Fri Sep 03, 2010 10:20 am


Very nice work Piotr ThumbsUp

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Re: larix from poland

Post  Hans van Meer. on Fri Sep 03, 2010 11:14 am

czerniachowski wrote:Hi all!!
This is my last work.Yamadori from Poland
Regards Piotr
Very Happy [img][/img]
[img][/img]

Hi Piotr,
welcome here on IBC!!! And what a beautiful tree to show us in your first post here!!! Great transformation and I love the way you show your tree in the last picture! One little point of critique: in this picture it looks like the bottom of the scroll is on the same line as you low branch, that should be avoided. Well don indeed! Show us more !! cheers cheers
I made your pictures a bit bigger so they are easier to view! Wink





Cheers,
Hans van Meer.

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Post  Mike Jones on Fri Sep 03, 2010 12:33 pm

That is an awesome before and after Very Happy

Hans,, why not the bottom of the scroll in-line? I didn't realise this was a no-no..personally I quite like the aesthetic balance...but then I like clean lines.

All the best

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Post  Kalogero on Fri Sep 03, 2010 12:42 pm

Hi Piotr,
how long it took from the raw tree 'till the end of styling ?
Regards
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Post  MACH5 on Fri Sep 03, 2010 12:59 pm

Beautiful work indeed and welcome to IBC!! I agree, the tree and scroll lining up creates a very powerful horizontal line that takes the eye away from the "prize". Tangents are always to be avoided in all forms of visual manifestations unless you want to direct the eye to them Smile

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Post  Milan Karpíšek on Fri Sep 03, 2010 6:09 pm

Hi Piotr, very nice larch and good job.
see you in Prague
greetings Milan

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Post  Rob Kempinski on Fri Sep 03, 2010 7:33 pm


Nice work Pitor. Where was the after photograph taken?


Milan Karpíšek wrote:Hi Piotr, very nice larch and good job.
see you in Prague
greetings Milan

Me too!

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Post  Hans van Meer. on Fri Sep 03, 2010 7:46 pm

Mike Jones wrote:That is an awesome before and after Very Happy

Hans,, why not the bottom of the scroll in-line? I didn't realise this was a no-no..personally I quite like the aesthetic balance...but then I like clean lines.

All the best

Mike

Hi Mike,
I answered your question earlier this afternoon, but it seamed to got lost?
But I will give you the shorter version! Smile
In a composition like this, were two elements are used to complete one total picture, you should always try to avoid straight lines, because they divide spaces in to geometrical forms and have the strange habit to force our eyes unwillingly to follow them. And they mostly lead our eyes to the sides of the picture. The place were the tree of your competitor might stand! Very Happy In this case the bottom line of the beautiful cascading branch continuous in the bottom line of the scroll and from there on to the right side of the picture. You dont want that.



Just by raising the scroll a few inches, the magical strait line is broken! And now the line of the bottom branch falls unhindered downwards and than our eyes have to go back upwards to the scroll. Now there is no square shaped empty space screaming for attention any more.



But I dont want to hijack this post any longer! All honor to Piotr, it is a wonderful and mature looking tree!
Cheers,
Hans van Meer.


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Re: larix from poland

Post  Mike Jones on Fri Sep 03, 2010 8:17 pm

Thank you Hans, and yes, a fantastic tree.

Mike

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Re: larix from poland

Post  Peter E. on Fri Sep 03, 2010 9:50 pm

Han's, once again you explain the simple points so elegantly.
Great to see you here. ThumbsUp
Do you know what has happened to the KoB blogs ?. scratch

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Re: larix from poland

Post  czerniachowski on Sun Sep 05, 2010 7:39 pm

Dear all,
Thank you very much for opinion about my larix, especially I would
like to say thank to Hans for halpping me in photo:)Rob Milan, see you
in Prague, according to the styling proces it took about eight hours.
I wanted to save all branchs. They made that ending effect. I was lucky
to find good yamadori and perfect assistent:)
First styling 02.2010
Best regards
Piotr
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Post  AdamJonas on Tue Sep 07, 2010 9:20 pm

Piotr, another one nice:)

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