Olea 2006 (Mirek Škrabal)

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Olea 2006 (Mirek Škrabal)

Post  Pavel Slovák on Sat May 29, 2010 9:57 pm

Hi all.

The owner is a friend Mirek. Own tree since 2006. The styling I made in spring 2007. Today I made another step in the evolution tree.
2007

2008


2010 today

today after styling



Pavel

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Post  Pola on Mon May 31, 2010 8:44 am

great job! ThumbsUp Love that trunk!

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Post  moshe emergui on Mon May 31, 2010 10:30 am

Olive, one of my favorite varieties, very nice work, beautiful tree

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Re: Olea 2006 (Mirek Škrabal)

Post  JimLewis on Mon May 31, 2010 12:57 pm

Great trunk. Lovely tree -- though I'd like it a bit better if it did not have a pointy, tent-like top.

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Post  cosmos on Mon May 31, 2010 5:06 pm

Great work. Was the tree a yamadori? I agree with JimLewis about the canopy that visually it would be more pleasing if it has a rounded top. Also now I think that a more sympathetic pot should be selected for the tree. The present pot has a lot of 'visual happening' that distract the eye from appreaciting the 'whole'. This is my opinion of course. Still a great tree. Congratulations and thanks for sharing.

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Re: Olea 2006 (Mirek Škrabal)

Post  Mike Jones on Mon May 31, 2010 6:34 pm

I like it apart from the pot.

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Post  Nik Rozman on Mon May 31, 2010 7:01 pm

Very good work. ThumbsUp
But how about removing the lowest left branch? And change the pot of course.

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Re: Olea 2006 (Mirek Škrabal)

Post  Pavel Slovák on Mon May 31, 2010 8:22 pm

Hi all.

Pola, Moshe, Mike - thank you very much for nice replies. Very Happy

Jim, Kosmos - thank you for yours nice coments. Very Happy Yes, I agree that the top of the tree is round. For now, the material was not suitable and branches to the stylized. I agree with the bowl, but owners will enjoy the moment. Very Happy Wink
Nik - Thank you for nice coment. Very Happy Thanks for the virtual, the dish was good, the color I would probably vote for some other gray-blue and green together. Very Happy
The left lower limb there but it must remain. Constitutes an important element of composition, depth of space. Without it, it was like 2D. Wink

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Re: Olea 2006 (Mirek Škrabal)

Post  Tony on Mon May 31, 2010 9:50 pm

Hi Pavel, great work on Mireks tree.. but the pot MUST go

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Post  Ian Warhurst on Mon May 31, 2010 10:13 pm

Once again Pavel lovely work the only thing needed to improve it is time and a new pot.

Ian.

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Re: Olea 2006 (Mirek Škrabal)

Post  fiona on Mon May 31, 2010 11:30 pm

Ian Warhurst wrote:Once again Pavel lovely work the only thing needed to improve it is time and a new pot.
And putting it in my garden! Laughing

Great work, Pavel. You continue to inspire us all on here.

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Re: Olea 2006 (Mirek Škrabal)

Post  Pavel Slovák on Tue Jun 01, 2010 7:51 pm

Hi Tony, my friend, I am glad to write here, thanks for the compliment. Very Happy
Mirek reads the forum, it certainly reflects the new pot. Very Happy
Hi Ian and Fiona , thank you very much for nice replies . Very Happy Very Happy

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Re: Olea 2006 (Mirek Škrabal)

Post  Pavel Slovák on Thu Apr 07, 2011 10:11 pm

Hi all

Today I worked on the restyling of Olea. I think back a bit further. Very Happy





Pavel
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Post  moyogijohn on Fri Apr 08, 2011 1:10 am

I really like like this tree!! the trunk is great along with the carveing...could you shorten that left branch any at all?? not critizing just a question...good work take care john

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Post  Russell Coker on Fri Apr 08, 2011 2:14 am

I like the lower left branch, I think it is almost necessary as it adds a lot of depth. And the Canton pot does not offend me one bit. If it must go, can I have it?

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Re: Olea 2006 (Mirek Škrabal)

Post  Todd Ellis on Fri Apr 08, 2011 3:20 am

This tree has great potential for Penjing style. The pot is a good fit; it really compliments the base and trunk and the texture of the foliage. A larger canopy will enhance the overall image of this tree. The pot is large for the tree right now, but will work when the tree grows more.
Best, Todd


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Re: Olea 2006 (Mirek Škrabal)

Post  Pavel Slovák on Fri Apr 08, 2011 7:11 pm

Hi John, Russell and Todd

Thank you very much for yours very nice coments. Very Happy
I appreciate it.
Gretings Pavel

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Re: Olea 2006 (Mirek Škrabal)

Post  pongsatorn.k on Sun Apr 10, 2011 5:14 am

Great work!!! What a Face

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Post  kauaibonsai on Sun Apr 10, 2011 6:31 am

good job pavel.

as the top grows and fills in, the tree gets better and better

best wishes, sam

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Re: Olea 2006 (Mirek Škrabal)

Post  Pavel Slovák on Sun Apr 10, 2011 10:28 pm

Hi pongsatorn.k and Sam

Thank you verymuch for yours very nice replies and compliments. Very Happy

Pavel

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Re: Olea 2006 (Mirek Škrabal)

Post  Rob Kempinski on Mon Apr 11, 2011 1:24 am

Good job Pavel. I like the little counter point branch on the lower left. A complex use of negative space. And I think the green pot is pretty cool.

Will I see you in Wroclav next month?

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Post  rolandp on Mon Apr 11, 2011 8:21 am

Very beautiful tree and a very ugly pot. Embarassed

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Re: Olea 2006 (Mirek Škrabal)

Post  Pavel Slovák on Mon Apr 11, 2011 8:05 pm

Hi Rob and Roland

Thank you very much for yours nice coment. Very Happy
I mean, just like Rob. When he's treetop, a pot is good. I like. Very Happy

Gretings Pavel

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