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Hawthorn 2007

Post  Pavel Slovák on Thu Feb 11, 2010 11:21 pm

Hi all friends.

The Hawthorn friend bought in spring 2007. He was in quite a deprived state. Foto original state, unfortunately I do not. The first photo is autumn 2007. The problem is in the top right of the tribe. Is too flat. Unfortunately, since the beginning of the scarred and too stiff. Is not to give him movement.In agreement, we decided to accept the error. For now. Smile Wink

autum 2007

2008

2009

2010






more pict.: http://www.bonsaivigi.cz/fotoalbum/techniky-tvarovani_-pestitelske-postupy-a-vyvoj/hloh----2007-_m_-skrabal_

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Re: Hawthorn 2007

Post  sitarbonsai on Fri Feb 12, 2010 1:35 am

Hey, Pavel
another great example of top quality bonsai
I like the second picture the best, and I'm intrigued
by the bonsai to the left in the second picture
looks a little deformed
anyway great work
keep it up,

Justin

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Re: Hawthorn 2007

Post  Mario Stefano on Fri Feb 12, 2010 7:50 am

Oh no, do so again .... beautiful tree! How many beautiful trees yet you can make? Bravo Pavel!
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Re: Hawthorn 2007

Post  anttal63 on Sat Feb 13, 2010 9:29 pm

Fantastic Pavel thankyou, this year i dig more Hawthorn! cheers

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Re: Hawthorn 2007

Post  Rui Marques on Thu Feb 09, 2012 10:48 am

Hi Pavel,

Any news from this Haw?

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Re: Hawthorn 2007

Post  Pavel Slovák on Thu Feb 09, 2012 11:25 am

Hi Rui
For now, the last photo is June 2010.

Now is the wintering grounds, another photo later. Wink
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Re: Hawthorn 2007

Post  Rui Marques on Thu Feb 09, 2012 12:25 pm

Great Pic Very Happy

Keep us informed about this Haw. Mine have already started to bud

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Re: Hawthorn 2007

Post  Pavel Slovák on Thu Feb 09, 2012 12:51 pm

Very Happy Very Happy Here is -17 ° C. Very Happy Very Happy

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Re: Hawthorn 2007

Post  Pavel Slovák on Fri Feb 10, 2012 9:26 pm

Hi Rui
I found a lost photo - June 2011 from our little show. Embarassed


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A virtual of your Hawthorn.

Post  Hans van Meer. on Sat Feb 11, 2012 7:23 pm

Hi Pavel,
I like the natural image that you are after in this Hawthorn. But, and I hope that you dont mind me saying, I find the branch (red arrow) that you have turned into the new top to strait. It draws all the attention to it self, because it looks out of place on that old gnarly trunk. You successfully designed your Hawthorn to look all wild and natural, so that straight branch is a distraction. I think that if you remove that straight branch (red arrow) and replace it with the branch with more movement (yellow arrow) the tree will look more natural and it will have a more pleasant unforced flow towards the top.



In the next virtual I removed that straight branch.



And replaced it with the one with more movement.



I think that that branch is still bendable, so it is doable. Any way, it is just a idea that I wanted to share, so I hope you dont mind?!
Keep us posted about the progress of this promising Hawthorn! You know that they are one of my favorite species!
Cheers,
Hans van Meer.

PS: Is it still so cold in your part of the world? It is here...BRBRBRRRR! Very Happy

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Re: Hawthorn 2007

Post  Pavel Slovák on Sat Feb 11, 2012 7:58 pm

Hi Hans

Thank you for a great design and a description of another possible solution. It is possible that in that direction. Very Happy ThumbsUp
But I have found yet another very interesting solution, and it shows a tree of course, much better than now. As will be better weather, I'll show you a photo.
For me now -23°C thumbs up

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Re: Hawthorn 2007

Post  Pavel Slovák on Thu Mar 28, 2013 9:27 pm

Hi all
Today I worked restyling and transplanting tree.
Autor new great pot is Mr. Pravoslav Dorda.
2012





Greetings Pavel
more pict.: http://www.bonsaivigi.cz/fotoalbum/tvarovani-a-vyvoj---styling-and-development/hloh----2007-_m_-skrabal_/

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Re: Hawthorn 2007

Post  Ian Young on Thu Mar 28, 2013 10:57 pm

Hi Pavel,

Very impressed with the fine ramification you have developed on this Hawthorn in the time period. I did agree with Hans option of shortening the apex/es but as I see it fill out, it's really starting to create a convincing image.

Love your work and these progression posts thumbs up

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Re: Hawthorn 2007

Post  giga on Fri Mar 29, 2013 12:11 am

I'm just getting into bonsai and this is just amazing!

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Re: Hawthorn 2007

Post  Fore on Fri Mar 29, 2013 2:29 pm

Beautiful as usual Pavel. Really nice development. But, I must agree with Hans, that straight part of the trunk is very distracting. I like Hans' virt. Maybe in time Wink

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Re: Hawthorn 2007

Post  Richard S on Fri Mar 29, 2013 7:27 pm

Beautiful tree. New pot is a great improvement as well.

Regards

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Re: Hawthorn 2007

Post  mambo on Fri Mar 29, 2013 8:43 pm

I am glad I read through before posting because Hans beat me to it! Even with the new pot/ramification etc, the tree still looks wrong both because of the double apex and the straight main apex. This spoils an otherwise fairly nice tree.

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Re: Hawthorn 2007

Post  PeacefulAres on Fri Mar 29, 2013 9:16 pm

I think the straight main trunk fits the rest of the tree. It looks look a tree that suffered an injury of some kind and then recovered.

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