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S trunk shimpaku

Post  apisit chuldecha on Mon Jan 26, 2015 3:10 am

Hello everyone this is again with shimpaku for last weekend work.

Before.

after haft way

after finished shari and jin



Thank you everyone.
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Post  Stan Kengai on Mon Jan 26, 2015 1:22 pm

Excellent work. I certainly would not have seen this design in the original tree. Your artistic vision is extraordinary, based on this and your other posted work.

If I had one critique, it would be that the foliage is too symmetrical. I think it might be nicer if you could lower foliage pad on the left side, and raise the pad on the right side. I understand that this was the initial styling and it may not have been possible to do.

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Post  JimLewis on Mon Jan 26, 2015 1:23 pm

Just as a matter of curiosity, are shimpaku all you have? They're all nice trees, but I'd soon get tired of nothing but . . .

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Post  apisit chuldecha on Thu Jan 29, 2015 4:58 am

JimLewis wrote:Just as a matter of curiosity, are shimpaku all you have?  They're all nice trees, but I'd soon get tired of nothing but . . .
thank you Jim as always , I focus on shimpaku more for now first ,until I feel I learn them enough ,I would move to learn other as the same attention.
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Post  apisit chuldecha on Thu Jan 29, 2015 5:12 am

Stan Kengai wrote:Excellent work.  I certainly would not have seen this design in the original tree.  Your artistic vision is extraordinary, based on this and your other posted work.

If I had one critique, it would be that the foliage is too symmetrical.  I think it might be nicer if you could lower foliage pad on the left side, and raise the pad on the right side.  I understand that this was the initial styling and it may not have been possible to do.

I also agree with you that the way too much symmetrical balance ,so I just removed the lower branch on the left that become jin .
from this view you can see the jin in front but still left the lower branch from behind that I made them overlapping each other

more clear at day light.

if turn the view a bit the jin in front will cover all the back side lower branch.


thank you for your comment.
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Post  apisit chuldecha on Fri Mar 20, 2015 8:57 am

update, other side.

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Post  yamasuri on Fri Mar 20, 2015 10:07 am

I like this tree very much. Thanks for update

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Post  ODS on Sun Mar 22, 2015 12:14 am

I like all your shimpakus, good job and don't put attention on inrelevants comments.

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Post  apisit chuldecha on Fri May 22, 2015 5:04 am

update

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