Bonsai-related poem
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Bonsai-related poem
The following was written by a close friend who practised bonsai for several years. He collected trees from the countryside in northern West Virginia, much of which had been strip- mined by coal companies over the years. Please enjoy. Tom
After trudging across the rugged terrain I make a choice, the one I want
Up and down the fertile land To pot and call my very own
I reach a rather desolate plain A trophy for the well-planned hunt
Decimated by greedy man That Mother Nature has groomed and grown
All of the humus was taken away It doesn't meet all the rules and laws
Stripped bare to reach the hidden coal To be a perfect Bonsai tree
Reclaiming was left for others to pay But I look inside at all the flaws
Once they reached their selfish goal That the little wonder shares with me
But Nature's determined to heal the land Then I begin to violate
And once again grow stately trees Like those who made this man-made dearth
Her first attempts are frutescent I too proceed to excavate
Stretching to reach my towering knees Then take my booty from the earth
Then I humble myself on bended knee And as we leave this rugged land
To meet this flora on her own ground Where she has grown her first few rings
I marvel at what I get to see She rests securely in my hand
These miniature beauties that I have found Not knowing what the future brings
Clutching to this desolate farm I hope to train my new found friend
Where Nature chose to seed a sprout As gently as a mother's hand
A tree no bigger than my arm And grow as stately in the end
With others like her all about As Mother Nature first had planned -Donald Floyd Jr.
After trudging across the rugged terrain I make a choice, the one I want
Up and down the fertile land To pot and call my very own
I reach a rather desolate plain A trophy for the well-planned hunt
Decimated by greedy man That Mother Nature has groomed and grown
All of the humus was taken away It doesn't meet all the rules and laws
Stripped bare to reach the hidden coal To be a perfect Bonsai tree
Reclaiming was left for others to pay But I look inside at all the flaws
Once they reached their selfish goal That the little wonder shares with me
But Nature's determined to heal the land Then I begin to violate
And once again grow stately trees Like those who made this man-made dearth
Her first attempts are frutescent I too proceed to excavate
Stretching to reach my towering knees Then take my booty from the earth
Then I humble myself on bended knee And as we leave this rugged land
To meet this flora on her own ground Where she has grown her first few rings
I marvel at what I get to see She rests securely in my hand
These miniature beauties that I have found Not knowing what the future brings
Clutching to this desolate farm I hope to train my new found friend
Where Nature chose to seed a sprout As gently as a mother's hand
A tree no bigger than my arm And grow as stately in the end
With others like her all about As Mother Nature first had planned -Donald Floyd Jr.
Tom Simonyi- Member
Re: Bonsai-related poem
Nice, I like the poem too.
my sister has done a fair amount of both professional and volunteer work in coal strip mine restoration. She will really like the poem, I am going to pass along the link.
my sister has done a fair amount of both professional and volunteer work in coal strip mine restoration. She will really like the poem, I am going to pass along the link.
Leo Schordje- Member
Re: Bonsai-related poem
I read...reread....then went away from this post for a time.
The word violate is telling and gives me a sick feeling about the reasons to take newly seeded trees from an area stripped and now regrowing.
Does this bother anyone but me?
Norma
The word violate is telling and gives me a sick feeling about the reasons to take newly seeded trees from an area stripped and now regrowing.
Does this bother anyone but me?
Norma
Norma- Member
Re: Bonsai-related poem
Hello Norma and Hello Tom –
I hesitate to write this, however…
As you seem to be Norma – I am troubled by the sentiment of this poem. It seems to justify that the intentions of a bonsai collector can undo or somehow rectify the damage of a strip mine just by intention. There is a thought divide here: removing life from the earth is bad when its intent is industry whereas removing life from earth for art is good!
We that are involved with the bonsai art cannot and should not divorce ourselves from the fact that we are removing living beings from their natural habitats. I do not cast judgment either positive or negative; however it is a statement of fact. The poem seems to postulate that the scale of destruction matters. That may well be, in relative terms, but in absolute terms it does not! In my mother’s words “you go the same place for lying as you do for stealing!”
Tom – please take no offence, this is simply commentary on a poem by another that you posted, but the following statement of the poem “I hope to train my new found friend as gently as a mother's hand and grow as stately in the end as Mother Nature first had planned” is quite simply a profound misstatement. If grown as bonsai this tree will be far outside the bounds of what “Mother Nature first had planned.” That is not bad. Bonsai is not bad! But it is not what “Mother Nature first had planned” – otherwise we would not be having conversations about whether bonsai itself is or is not art.
I do not mind bonsai artists harvesting wild trees as blank canvases for their artistic endeavors as long as such harvesting is done lawfully. However I do take exception to the idea that harvesting trees is somehow part of “Nature’s Plan”.
Many pardons if I have offended you, but I cannot share the sentiment of this poem.
David Brunner
I hesitate to write this, however…
As you seem to be Norma – I am troubled by the sentiment of this poem. It seems to justify that the intentions of a bonsai collector can undo or somehow rectify the damage of a strip mine just by intention. There is a thought divide here: removing life from the earth is bad when its intent is industry whereas removing life from earth for art is good!
We that are involved with the bonsai art cannot and should not divorce ourselves from the fact that we are removing living beings from their natural habitats. I do not cast judgment either positive or negative; however it is a statement of fact. The poem seems to postulate that the scale of destruction matters. That may well be, in relative terms, but in absolute terms it does not! In my mother’s words “you go the same place for lying as you do for stealing!”
Tom – please take no offence, this is simply commentary on a poem by another that you posted, but the following statement of the poem “I hope to train my new found friend as gently as a mother's hand and grow as stately in the end as Mother Nature first had planned” is quite simply a profound misstatement. If grown as bonsai this tree will be far outside the bounds of what “Mother Nature first had planned.” That is not bad. Bonsai is not bad! But it is not what “Mother Nature first had planned” – otherwise we would not be having conversations about whether bonsai itself is or is not art.
I do not mind bonsai artists harvesting wild trees as blank canvases for their artistic endeavors as long as such harvesting is done lawfully. However I do take exception to the idea that harvesting trees is somehow part of “Nature’s Plan”.
Many pardons if I have offended you, but I cannot share the sentiment of this poem.
David Brunner
David Brunner- Member
Re: Bonsai-related poem
Norma, David,
that is the problem, collecting, even if paid for and legal [ as a permit ] will the tree survive? Should it be removed ?
What is a tree - lifeform - toy - as the reasoning goes - they can feel no pain ?
And x years from now, we find out that we were not listening or looking in the correct direction.
Years ago, a large section of land leading to Sangre Grande, burnt down, Mora forest, it was prohibited to enter the area and the zone regrew itself very rapidly. Yet squatters did quietly move in, and took advantage of the undergrowth, with secret paths to their houses.
The poem makes you think, and that is most excellent!!
How much does man impact on his environment, what will he leave behind. Will we eventually kill ourselves, will the next dominant species - Cats / Dogs ? , be any better?
This is why I try to teach others to work with seeds / cuttings and if the urge to collect comes about take from an area where trees/shrubs are not wanted -------- public drains, sides of the road and so on.
BUT the urge to show off, especially if one has no life achievements, becomes very strong as one ages.
[ remember the big cars and houses and ................]
Later.
Khaimraj
that is the problem, collecting, even if paid for and legal [ as a permit ] will the tree survive? Should it be removed ?
What is a tree - lifeform - toy - as the reasoning goes - they can feel no pain ?
And x years from now, we find out that we were not listening or looking in the correct direction.
Years ago, a large section of land leading to Sangre Grande, burnt down, Mora forest, it was prohibited to enter the area and the zone regrew itself very rapidly. Yet squatters did quietly move in, and took advantage of the undergrowth, with secret paths to their houses.
The poem makes you think, and that is most excellent!!
How much does man impact on his environment, what will he leave behind. Will we eventually kill ourselves, will the next dominant species - Cats / Dogs ? , be any better?
This is why I try to teach others to work with seeds / cuttings and if the urge to collect comes about take from an area where trees/shrubs are not wanted -------- public drains, sides of the road and so on.
BUT the urge to show off, especially if one has no life achievements, becomes very strong as one ages.
[ remember the big cars and houses and ................]
Later.
Khaimraj
Khaimraj Seepersad- Member
Re: Bonsai-related poem
I certainly appreciate the opinions of all that have replied and I am sure Mr. Floyd will appreciate them as well. I respect and understand the points made by Mr. Brunner and I take no offense whatsoever. It is always good to hear others' point of view.
Best regards,
Tom
Best regards,
Tom
Tom Simonyi- Member
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