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Post  amanluthra688 Wed Nov 06, 2013 10:45 am

just tried the acacia landscape 20131110

Seedlings of  one year
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Post  JimLewis Wed Nov 06, 2013 1:08 pm

I've fixed your sideways photo.  I'm told it depends on how you hold the camera/phone, but you should be able to fix it with any graphics software.  

It will be a while before your nice start has any real feeling to it.  Maybe when it comes time to repot, you can fix the symmetry problem.  As it stands, the stream running down the exact center of the composition makes it a bit on the static side.
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Post  amanluthra688 Thu Nov 07, 2013 3:19 am

Thanks jim
It was my first try . The trees are very young .
As the winter is starting i just poted the seedling to let it grow and when grown these will be resized and planted in a forest slandscape. In tropics we have to take great care while replanting plants . As the temperature is hot the roots dry quickly so we have to plant quickly. When the plants catch some roots we can easly repot taking my own time.
I know this is not the proper form could u pls guide with some symmetry
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Post  Marty Weiser Thu Nov 07, 2013 4:41 am

I like these landscapes/forests when the stream/path runs at a much larger angle to the viewer. If your stream ran off to the right in your landscape so we could not see it behind the tree trunks it would be much more interesting to me.

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Post  amanluthra688 Thu Nov 07, 2013 4:52 am

Thanks marty
U mean to say that the trees to the right should come to the viewer first and the stream turning right along the small mountain
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Post  fredman1 Sat Nov 09, 2013 9:51 am

Which Acacia is this?

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Post  Marty Weiser Sat Nov 09, 2013 3:26 pm

I was thinking that the back of the stream should be out of sight behind the little mountain and that the front of the stream might be more to the left. It is a little harder to get the back of the stream hidden in a landscape like this one where the trees are in front of a mountain range.

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Post  JimLewis Sat Nov 09, 2013 5:30 pm

And, the stream/river is arrow straight. That's not really a natural look.

Still, this is a very good start.
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