mother and childrens

this is a tree that I love it vey much in my collection , although it is not almost completely. first time seeing it, I got the idea to do a tree symbolizes a mother safeguard those children.
I began work as soon as it has just reached home.

before



after 3 hour



after 1 month



please tell me any suggestion for improvement

thanks all.

I like this tree, its original to me. My suggestion is to do something with the "second" daughter branch/trunk. Only because you now have two daughter trunks or one branch that does not move in the same direction as the rest of them. Then my idea would be to move the lower daughter trunk closer to the mother trunk to fill the void where the secondary branch/trunk is.

hello jake,
I have read your suggestion and consider the fact this morning. I will try to perform better.
by the way , I sending latest photograph. would you say more anything to me?

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thanks so much.

best,
RB.